列表— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes, I generally do make a list when I am about to go shopping. In my case, it's extremely important to make a list because I have a habit of forgetting things. Out of 10 items, I might end up picking only 8 and I might not remember the other two. So it's extremely important in my case to make a shopping list. I make a shopping list.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yes, I do make a list for my Merc work. I always have a list of patients that I have in a day and I keep a list of what was the treatment done for the last time and what treatment is to be done during this appointment. So that helps me stay organized.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
In my opinion, some people probably don't like making a list because they find it extremely tedious, and probably some people are extremely efficient and they feel they don't feel the need for a detailed list to remember things.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I definitely prefer to make my list on a paper. Uh, I'm not very tech savvy so I don't like the idea of making a list on the phone and then keep searching for the list. So I think uh, paper is extremely efficient, uh, for keeping the list.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 75.0建议: Your answer is clear and relevant but a bit repetitive and slightly long. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary to express your points.
示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget items otherwise. For instance, I might remember only eight out of ten things I need. Therefore, having a list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 80.0建议: Your answer is relevant and informative but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid repeating the word 'list' too often and use synonyms or pronouns instead. Adding a concluding sentence would make your answer more complete.
示例: Yes, I make a list for my work as a Merc. It includes the patients I have each day and details of their previous and upcoming treatments. This system helps me stay organized and ensures I provide proper care.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 70.0建议: Your answer addresses the question but has some redundancy and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'probably' and 'they feel'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clearer reasons.
示例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it tedious. Others may be very efficient and feel they can remember things without needing a detailed list.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 65.0建议: Your answer is understandable but contains filler words like 'uh' and some repetition. Try to speak more fluently and avoid unnecessary pauses. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and try to expand your answer with a reason or example.
示例: I definitely prefer making my lists on paper because I'm not very tech savvy. Using paper is straightforward and I can easily find my list without searching through my phone, which makes the process more efficient.
语法
× I always have a list of patients that I have in a day and I keep a list of what was the treatment done for the last time and what treatment is to be done during this appointment.
✓ I always have a list of patients that I see in a day and I keep a list of what treatment was done last time and what treatment is to be done during this appointment.
The pronoun 'that I have in a day' is incorrect because 'have' does not properly describe seeing patients. It should be 'that I see in a day' to correctly indicate the action. Also, the phrase 'what was the treatment done for the last time' is awkward; it should be 'what treatment was done last time' for clarity and correct word order.
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