列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了个人偏好，但语言有些不自然，且存在语法错误，如'relaxable'应为'relaxing'。建议使用更地道的表达，并避免重复。

示例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I enjoy browsing freely. I like to pick items that catch my eye, which makes shopping more relaxing and enjoyable.

建议: 回答内容较完整，但部分表达不够自然，如'start walking'应为'start working'。建议注意用词准确性，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I always make a list before I start working in the morning because my tutor asks for my daily routine. This method works well as it helps me avoid mistakes in experiments and complete each step carefully.

建议: 回答表达了原因，但句子结构略显重复，且部分表达不够地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并丰富细节。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and boring. They prefer a less organized life as strict plans can make them feel restricted, so they like to keep things flexible.

建议: 回答清晰且内容具体，但部分表达可以更简洁自然。建议适当使用连接词提升连贯性。

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I can easily check off completed tasks and even set alarms to remind me of things I need to finish on time.

× Well, making this before shopping is not my cup of tea because I'm not the kind of person who loves making plans.

✓ Well, making lists before shopping is not my cup of tea because I'm not the kind of person who loves making plans.

这里的'making this'不合适，应该用复数形式'making lists'，表示购物前列清单的行为。

× I just pick up, which catches my eyes and will make the shopping experience more relaxable and enjoyable.

✓ I just pick up what catches my eye and will make the shopping experience more relaxing and enjoyable.

'catches my eyes'应为单数形式'catches my eye'，因为习惯用单数表达注意力集中。'relaxable'不是正确的形容词，应改为'relaxing'。

× I always make a list before I start walking in the morning because my tutor asked me to send him my daily routine.

✓ I always make a list before I start walking in the morning because my tutor asks me to send him my daily routine.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时，'asked'改为'asks'。

× Well, the reason why some people don't love making this is that they will find it a kind of time consuming and boring.

✓ Well, the reason why some people don't love making lists is that they find it kind of time-consuming and boring.

'making this'指代不明确，应改为'making lists'。'will find'改为一般现在时'find'，因为表达普遍事实。'a kind of'后面不加冠词。

× I can check the things that I finish on my phone every time I want and I can even set an alarm to remind me the things that I should finish at that time.

✓ I can check the things that I have finished on my phone whenever I want, and I can even set an alarm to remind me of the things that I should finish at that time.

'the things that I finish'应使用完成时'have finished'表示已完成的事项。'remind me the things'应为'remind me of the things'，介词使用错误。