列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and some sentences are grammatically incorrect. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to ensure I buy all the essential items. This helps me stay focused, and after that, I sometimes browse for new things. Therefore, making a list is very important for me.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement. Try to use clearer linking words and correct verb forms to make your answer more natural and effective.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work because I have many tasks. By following the list step by step, I can complete my work more efficiently. It works well for me, especially when I need to make changes, as I can easily adjust the list.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be more flexible and do things their own way. They may find strict organization limiting and enjoy having more freedom in their actions. So, it really depends on personal preference.

建议: Your answer covers the main points but could be more concise and grammatically correct. Use clearer linking words and avoid filler words to make your response more natural and effective.

示例: Nowadays, I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient. I can use bullet points to track completed tasks and set alarms as reminders. However, at work, I sometimes use paper lists depending on the task.

× I will make a list when I shop because I need to remember what should I buy from the shop.

✓ I will make a list when I shop because I need to remember what I should buy from the shop.

In English, the word order in indirect questions should be subject + verb, not auxiliary verb + subject. 'What should I buy' is a direct question form, but here it is an indirect question, so it should be 'what I should buy'. This is a common mistake when forming indirect questions.

× I will make a list for my works because I have different things to do.

✓ I will make a list for my work because I have different things to do.

The word 'work' is an uncountable noun when referring to tasks or job duties, so it should not be pluralized as 'works'. Using 'works' here is incorrect. The correct form is 'work'.

× If I follow the step the list actually I can doing step by step and then follow it more detailedly and then finish it better.

✓ If I follow the steps in the list, I can actually do it step by step, then follow it more carefully and finish it better.

After modal verbs like 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. 'Can doing' is incorrect; it should be 'can do'. Also, 'step' should be plural as 'steps' because it refers to multiple actions. 'More detailedly' is not a correct adverb; 'more carefully' or 'in more detail' is better.

× Because some people don't like to organize so strict the things for a lease, so they will just depends on what they thought about and then doing what they like.

✓ Because some people don't like to organize things so strictly, so they will just depend on what they think about and then do what they like.

The phrase 'organize so strict the things for a lease' is incorrect. The correct form is 'organize things so strictly' because 'strict' is an adjective and needs to be changed to the adverb 'strictly' to modify the verb 'organize'. Also, 'depends' should be 'depend' to agree with plural subject 'they'. 'Thought' should be 'think' to match present tense. 'Doing' should be 'do' to maintain parallel verb form.

× Because some people don't like to follow all the lists, all the rules, they want to do it by her own, like more freedom.

✓ Because some people don't like to follow all the lists, all the rules, they want to do it on their own, like more freedom.

The phrase 'by her own' is incorrect because the pronoun does not agree with the subject 'some people' which is plural. The correct phrase is 'on their own' to match plural subject and correct preposition usage.

× Nowaday, I will prefer making a list on my phone because phone is very convenient.

✓ Nowadays, I prefer making a list on my phone because the phone is very convenient.

'Nowaday' is a misspelling; the correct word is 'Nowadays'. Also, 'prefer' is usually used in present tense to express habitual preference, so 'I will prefer' is incorrect. 'The phone' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific object known to both speaker and listener.

× You can make the list from our notice and then you can have the bullet point to recognize that you finish or not about the things.

✓ You can make the list from your notes and then you can have bullet points to recognize whether you have finished the things or not.

'Our notice' is incorrect; it should be 'your notes' to refer to the listener's notes. 'Bullet point' should be plural 'bullet points' as multiple points are usually used. 'Recognize that you finish or not about the things' is awkward; better to say 'recognize whether you have finished the things or not'.