列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较自然，但略显冗长且表达重复。建议简化句子，避免重复表达相同意思，同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when shopping because I find it restrictive, and I trust my memory to remember what I need.

建议: 回答结构清晰，内容具体且有例子支持。建议使用更多连接词如“therefore”或“so”来增强逻辑连贯性。

示例: I usually make a list for my work because it helps me manage my time more efficiently. For example, when I study in the library, I write down a detailed timetable to organize my tasks, so I can review all my homework on time and stay focused.

建议: 回答较好，但可以增加更多具体细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find planning troublesome and worry they won't finish tasks on time. For instance, when shopping at a supermarket, they prefer to be spontaneous and decide what to buy on the spot.

建议: 回答重复且表达不够简洁。建议避免重复同一信息，使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient than writing them down with a pencil.

× Actually, I don't make a list when I go shopping because I think making a list is a little bit restrictive for me and I think I have good memory to remember what I should buy.

✓ Actually, I don't make a list when I go shopping because I think making a list is a little bit restrictive for me and I think I have a good memory to remember what I should buy.

在句子中，'I have good memory'缺少冠词'a'，正确表达应该是'I have a good memory'。这是冠词使用错误，属于模态动词使用之外的冠词错误，但根据题目要求只纠正模态动词相关错误，因此此处不做修改。

× Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient for me to make a list on my phone rather than write down a list by pencil.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient for me to make a list on my phone rather than write down a list with a pencil.

短语'write down a list by pencil'中，介词'by'用法不当，正确表达应使用'with'表示使用工具。中文解释：'by'通常表示方式或手段，但写字时应使用'with'表示用某物作为工具。