列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。"rest"は"list"の誤りと思われ、"restricted by any risks"も意味が不明瞭です。より自然な表現で、理由を明確に述べ、5文以内にまとめることを意識しましょう。

示例: No, I don't usually make a shopping list because I prefer to shop spontaneously. I enjoy choosing items based on my mood and needs at the moment. This way, shopping feels more enjoyable and less restrictive.

建议: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。"condition of our own work"は意味が曖昧で、"In recently"は誤りです。より明確で自然な表現を使い、理由を具体的に述べましょう。

示例: Yes, I always make lists for my work because they help me organize tasks clearly. Recently, with the internet, sharing information has become easier, so making lists is indispensable for effective communication.

建议: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。"complicated"は形容詞なので名詞と組み合わせる必要があります。より簡潔で明確な理由を述べ、接続詞を適切に使いましょう。

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because it can be complicated and time-consuming. Instead, they prefer to start tasks directly, believing it is more efficient.

建议: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。"EUR"は意味不明で、"nowadays and there are"の構文も誤りです。より自然で具体的な理由を述べ、簡潔にまとめましょう。

示例: I prefer making lists on my smartphone because there are many useful apps that help me organize tasks more efficiently and smoothly.

× No, I don't make any rest when I go to shopping because I don't like to be restricted by any risks when I go to shopping.

✓ No, I don't make any list when I go shopping because I don't like to be restricted by any rules when I go shopping.

The word 'rest' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'list'. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. 'Any risks' is not appropriate in this context; 'any rules' or 'restrictions' fits better. The sentence needs correction for appropriate word choice and preposition usage.

× No, I don't make any rest when I go to shopping because I don't like to be restricted by any risks when I go to shopping.

✓ No, I don't make any list when I go shopping because I don't like to be restricted by any rules when I go shopping.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping'. The verb 'go' is directly followed by the gerund 'shopping' without 'to'.

× Yes, I always make lists for my work because I have to share the condition of our own work in the workplace.

✓ Yes, I always make lists for my work because I have to share the status of our own work in the workplace.

The phrase 'share the condition of our own work' is awkward; 'share the status of our work' is more natural. Also, 'condition' is not the correct noun to describe work progress or situation.

× In recently I can share a lot of information through the Internet, so I'm making lists is indispensable for work.

✓ Recently, I can share a lot of information through the Internet, so making lists is indispensable for work.

The phrase 'In recently' is incorrect; it should be 'Recently'. Also, 'I'm making lists is indispensable' is grammatically incorrect; the correct form is 'making lists is indispensable'. The sentence needs correction for adverb placement and sentence structure.

× Some people rather regards it as a very time consuming.

✓ Some people rather regard it as very time-consuming.

The subject 'Some people' is plural, so the verb should be 'regard' not 'regards'. Also, 'a very time consuming' is incorrect; 'very time-consuming' is the correct adjective phrase. The sentence structure needs correction for subject-verb agreement and adjective usage.

× I think it's simply a complicated and take a lot of time.

✓ I think it's simply complicated and takes a lot of time.

The phrase 'a complicated' is incorrect; 'complicated' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. Also, the verb 'take' should be 'takes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The conjunction 'and' connects two predicates, so both should be grammatically correct.

× In contrast, such people think that starting the job directories are much more efficient.

✓ In contrast, such people think that starting the job directly is much more efficient.

The phrase 'job directories' is incorrect; likely intended is 'job directly'. Also, 'starting the job directly' is a better phrase meaning beginning the work immediately. The verb 'are' should be 'is' to agree with the singular subject 'starting'.

× I prefer making lists by using smartphones because nowadays and there are many types of EUR for your smartphone apps which can make our tasks much more smoothly.

✓ I prefer making lists by using smartphones because nowadays there are many types of apps for your smartphone which can make our tasks much smoother.

The phrase 'many types of EUR for your smartphone apps' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended is 'many types of apps for your smartphone'. Also, 'much more smoothly' should be 'much smoother' to correctly modify 'tasks'. The conjunction 'and' after 'nowadays' is unnecessary and incorrect here.