列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and concise. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain why you make a list, using linking words for coherence.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because when I have more than two or three items to buy, I tend to forget them. Therefore, making a list helps me remember everything I need.

建议: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then explain how making a list helps you. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition for better clarity.

示例: Yes, I make a list when I have many tasks to do. This helps me organize my work and complete each task one by one efficiently.

建议: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct answer, then explain with reasons. Avoid filler words and improve grammar for better fluency.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and can remember several things without writing them down.

建议: Make your answer more fluent and natural by using correct grammar and linking words. Clearly state your preference and reasons in a concise way.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because typing is easier than writing by hand. Also, we always carry our phones, but not a notebook, so it's more convenient.

× Yes, I definitely make a list when I go to for shopping and because if I if I bought two or three items and more than that and that time I make a notes because I don't remember two or three things.

✓ Yes, I definitely make a list when I go shopping because if I buy two or three items or more, I make notes as I don't remember two or three things.

The phrase 'go to for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' which uses the verb + -ing form. Also, 'bought' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'buy'. 'Make a notes' is incorrect; it should be 'make notes' without 'a' as 'notes' is plural.

× Yes, I just say I make a list if I have a full lot of work and I have I have many task that I am that I might make a list and I I complete my work one by one and and I can organize.

✓ Yes, I just say I make a list if I have a full lot of work and I have many tasks that I might make a list for, and I complete my work one by one and I can organize.

The phrase 'many task' is incorrect because 'task' is singular; it should be plural 'tasks' when used with 'many'. Also, 'full lot of work' is acceptable but 'a full lot of work' is better. The sentence structure is slightly awkward but within the scope, only quantifier errors are corrected.

× I think some people have a good memory and they can memorize 234 and five things and I I think that that's why they not make a a list.

✓ I think some people have a good memory and they can memorize two, three, four, and five things, and I think that's why they do not make a list.

The phrase 'they not make a a list' is incorrect; it should be 'they do not make a list' to correctly use the auxiliary verb 'do' for negation. Also, numbers should be separated by commas for clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easier to write when typing compared to write and and is is we carry any time our phone with us and we cannot carry a book.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easier to type compared to writing, and we carry our phone with us all the time, but we cannot carry a book.

The phrase 'compared to write' is incorrect; it should be 'compared to writing' to use the gerund form after 'compared to'. Also, 'carry any time our phone' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'carry our phone with us all the time'. The sentence is corrected for proper preposition and gerund usage.