列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to start with a direct response, then add specific reasons or examples using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid repeating phrases and aim for more natural expressions.

示例: I didn't use to make shopping lists, but recently I started doing so because I often forgot items when shopping randomly. Now, I write down everything I need, which helps me remember and buy all the necessary things.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more concise. Use linking words like 'first' and 'then' to organize your points logically. Also, correct grammar and use natural phrases to improve fluency.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work. First, I prioritize tasks by importance, putting the most urgent ones at the top. Then, I complete them in order, which helps me finish everything efficiently and feel satisfied.

建议: Your answer is a bit repetitive and unclear. Try to express your ideas more naturally and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

示例: Some people prefer to rely on their memory instead of making lists. They like to prioritize tasks mentally and may find lists restrictive or unnecessary.

建议: Your answer is understandable but could be more fluent and structured. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to explain your preference clearly. Also, avoid awkward phrases and improve grammar for naturalness.

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because I find it easier to prioritize and keep track of tasks that way. I tried using my phone or computer before, but it was harder to follow up, so paper works best for me.

× That was not in practice before but recently I started making lists and I shop as per the list.

✓ That was not in practice before but recently I started making lists and I shop according to the list.

The phrase 'shop as per the list' is awkward and not standard English. 'Shop according to the list' is the correct expression. This is a usage issue related to prepositions, but since 'as per' is often considered informal or incorrect in this context, 'according to' is preferred.

× Before I never used to make a list.

✓ Before, I never used to make a list.

A comma after 'Before' improves clarity and sentence flow. The original sentence is understandable but adding the comma is grammatically correct.

× I used to used to randomly go to the shop and remember the things what I wanted to shop.

✓ I used to randomly go to the shop and remember the things that I wanted to buy.

The phrase 'used to used to' is a repetition error; only one 'used to' is needed. Also, 'the things what I wanted to shop' is incorrect; 'what' should be 'that' and 'shop' should be 'buy' because 'shop' is a verb meaning to visit stores, not to purchase items.

× But after coming home I feel like I left a lot of things so.

✓ But after coming home, I feel like I have left a lot of things behind.

The sentence lacks clarity and proper tense. 'I feel like I left' should be 'I feel like I have left' to indicate a recent past action affecting the present. Also, 'so' at the end is unnecessary and 'behind' clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I do make list for the work.

✓ Yes, I do make lists for work.

'List' should be plural 'lists' because the context implies multiple lists. Also, 'for the work' is better as 'for work' to generalize the statement.

× I keep an order of the works which I need to complete on time and highest priority comes first and the least prioritized things.

✓ I keep an order of the tasks which I need to complete on time; the highest priority comes first and the least prioritized tasks come last.

'Works' is incorrect here; 'tasks' is the appropriate plural noun. The sentence also needs clearer structure and punctuation for readability.

× I write it down at the last and by this I could finish the task easily and I get a satisfaction that I could finish.

✓ I write it down at the end, and by doing this, I can finish the tasks easily and feel satisfied that I have completed them.

The phrase 'at the last' should be 'at the end'. 'Could' is past tense and should be 'can' to match present context. 'Get a satisfaction' is incorrect; 'feel satisfied' is the correct expression. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× And they do not may not like listing things and going as per the list.

✓ And they may not like listing things and following the list.

'Do not may not' is incorrect; only 'may not' is needed to express possibility. 'Going as per the list' is awkward; 'following the list' is the correct phrase.

× I like to make list on papers.

✓ I like to make lists on paper.

'List' should be plural 'lists' because it implies multiple lists. 'Papers' is incorrect here; 'paper' is the correct uncountable noun for writing material.

× I tried in computer or my phone before but I felt difficulty in prioritizing that and keeping following up those lists.

✓ I tried using the computer or my phone before, but I found it difficult to prioritize and keep track of those lists.

'Tried in computer' is incorrect; 'tried using the computer' is correct. 'Felt difficulty in' should be 'found it difficult to'. 'Keeping following up' is awkward; 'keep track of' is the correct phrase.

× So I what I do is I make a list in the paper and I cut off all.

✓ So what I do is make a list on paper and then cross off items as I complete them.

The phrase 'I cut off all' is unclear and incorrect. The correct expression is 'cross off items' to indicate marking completed tasks. Also, 'in the paper' should be 'on paper'.