列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy and saves time at the store.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời logic hơn.

示例: I occasionally make lists for work, but mostly I rely on my timetable to organize tasks, which works effectively for me.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung vào việc diễn đạt ý chính một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh.

示例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it complicated or are unsure about what to include, which makes the process feel overwhelming.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có nhiều từ thừa và ngắt quãng không cần thiết. Bạn nên luyện tập nói trôi chảy hơn, tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn.

示例: I prefer making digital lists on my phone using note apps because they are flexible and convenient for planning daily activities like meals or outings.

× Actually, I usually make a list when I go shopping or I go to the market because I can remind or I can remember just by looking at the sheets or looking at the list and to know what I'm going to buy.

✓ Actually, I usually make a list when I go shopping or go to the market because I can remind myself or remember just by looking at the sheets or the list to know what I'm going to buy.

The verb 'remind' requires an object, so 'remind myself' is correct. Also, 'or I go to the market' is better as 'or go to the market' to avoid repetition and improve sentence flow.

× Well, the first thing I should mention is that occasionally make a list and when I'm working, because it's not, I have my own timetables and my time schedule.

✓ Well, the first thing I should mention is that I occasionally make a list when I'm working because I have my own timetables and my time schedule.

The modal verb 'should' is correctly used, but the sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'occasionally make a list'. Also, 'because it's not' is incomplete and unnecessary here, so it is removed for clarity.

× So I can know, I can see at the timetable or the schedule that I know what I'm going to do and it's work.

✓ So I can know, I can see from the timetable or the schedule what I'm going to do and it works.

The phrase 'at the timetable' is incorrect; 'from the timetable' is correct preposition usage. Also, 'it's work' should be 'it works' to agree with the subject and verb form.

× It's effectively.

✓ It works effectively.

'Effectively' is an adverb and should modify a verb. 'It's effectively' is incorrect because 'effectively' cannot be used as a predicate adjective. The correct form is 'It works effectively.'

× Well in my point of view some people or some individual do don't like make list because it's they feel so com complicated or they don't know what they they are going to list something or some even they feel it's too complex they want to.

✓ Well, in my point of view, some people or some individuals don't like to make lists because they feel it's so complicated or they don't know what they are going to list. Some even feel it's too complex.

The sentence has multiple pronoun errors: 'do don't' is incorrect, should be 'don't'; 'make list' should be 'make lists'; 'it's they feel' is incorrect, should be 'they feel'; 'they they' is repeated; sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity.

× Well in my point of view some people or some individual do don't like make list because it's they feel so com complicated or they don't know what they they are going to list something or some even they feel it's too complex they want to.

✓ Well, in my point of view, some people or some individuals don't like to make lists because they feel it's so complicated or they don't know what they are going to list. Some even feel it's too complex.

'Some individual' should be plural 'some individuals' to match quantifier 'some'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make lists' to agree in number.

× I usually can use app notes because, uh, it's so flexible and sometimes it's even effective when you need something such as, uh, where I going to go today or what I'm going to eat today.

✓ I usually use the Notes app because it's so flexible and sometimes even effective when you need something like where I am going to go today or what I'm going to eat today.

'Use app notes' is better as 'use the Notes app' for clarity and correct noun phrase. 'Such as' is better replaced with 'like' in this context. Also, 'where I going to go' is missing 'am' for correct present continuous tense.