列表— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
List when you shop. Yes I do. It's easier for me to remember some things I need to buy and I have bad memory. It can helps me to buy something because I always go to the shop once a week so I will buy so many things because I like to cook.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Sure, I will make a list for my work. It's easier for me to check what I need to do, what things I finished because I'm a teacher. I have so many things I need to do, and I also have seven classes, so many people and children I need to talk to.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Because maybe they have good memory, they don't need to do make a list and when they finish some things they need to check it. Oh, this one, I did it. Maybe it's hard for them to check it some things.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I think both OK, if I don't have paper I prefer right on my, but for me I prefer to make a list on the paper. It's easier to write. I like hold the pen to write down some things and when I write I still to remember what I need to do.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答时语法错误较多，且表达不够连贯。建议注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复表达，同时使用连接词使句子更流畅。
示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy. Since I shop once a week and enjoy cooking, having a list ensures I don't forget any ingredients.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构简单且有语法错误。建议使用连接词连接句子，丰富表达，同时注意时态和冠词的使用。
示例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me keep track of my tasks. As a teacher with seven classes, I have many responsibilities and people to communicate with, so lists are very useful.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 60.0建议: 表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议理清思路，使用连接词，避免重复，并用更准确的词汇表达原因。
示例: Some people might dislike making lists because they have a good memory and don't feel the need to write things down. Others may find it difficult or time-consuming to check off completed tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答中有语法和表达错误，句子不够连贯。建议使用完整句子，注意动词形式和介词使用，增强表达的自然性。
示例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember better. However, if I don't have paper, I use my phone to make a list since it's convenient.
语法
× It can helps me to buy something because I always go to the shop once a week so I will buy so many things because I like to cook.
✓ It can help me to buy something because I always go to the shop once a week so I will buy so many things because I like to cook.
动词help在情态动词can后应使用原形，不能加s。这里的helps是错误的单数形式。
× I think both OK, if I don't have paper I prefer right on my, but for me I prefer to make a list on the paper.
✓ I think both are OK. If I don't have paper, I prefer to write on my phone, but for me, I prefer to make a list on paper.
短语'prefer right on my'不完整且用词错误，应为'prefer to write on my phone'。此外，'on the paper'通常说成'on paper'。
× I like hold the pen to write down some things and when I write I still to remember what I need to do.
✓ I like to hold the pen to write down some things, and when I write, I still remember what I need to do.
动词like后应接不定式'to hold'，而不是动词原形。'still to remember'结构错误，应为'still remember'。
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