列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'like do something spontaneously' 대신 'like to do things spontaneously'로 수정하고, 중복된 표현('I usually don't make a list')을 피하세요. 또한, 답변을 3~4문장으로 간결하게 구성하고, 이유를 명확히 설명하는 것이 좋습니다.

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. I enjoy choosing items based on my mood or needs at the moment.

建议: 답변에 문법적 오류와 어휘 선택 오류가 많습니다. 'make a risk'는 잘못된 표현이며, 'make a list'를 명확히 하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 문장을 간결하고 논리적으로 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work to avoid missing important tasks. It helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.

建议: 문법과 표현이 부자연스럽고 중복이 많습니다. 'it's kind of hassle' 대신 'it's a hassle'로 수정하고, 문장을 명확하게 나누어 표현하세요. 또한, 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하는 것이 좋습니다.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to be more flexible. I understand this because planning everything can feel restrictive.

建议: 답변이 짧고 구체적인 이유가 부족합니다. 'prefer make a list' 대신 'prefer to make a list'로 문법을 수정하고, 왜 휴대폰이 더 편한지 구체적으로 설명하세요.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit or check them anytime.

× I like do something spontaneously, so I usually don't make a list.

✓ I like doing something spontaneously, so I usually don't make a list.

The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing general preferences. Therefore, 'do' should be changed to 'doing'.

× Yeah, sometimes I make a risk for my work because if I have to loss of works, then I do have to make a list because I don't want to like miss something, you know?

✓ Yeah, sometimes I make a list for my work because if I have a lot of work, then I do have to make a list because I don't want to miss something, you know?

The phrase 'make a risk' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list'. Also, 'loss of works' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of work' to express quantity properly.

× Yeah, sometimes I make a risk for my work because if I have to loss of works, then I do have to make a list because I don't want to like miss something, you know?

✓ Yeah, sometimes I make a list for my work because if I have a lot of work, then I do have to make a list because I don't want to miss something, you know?

The phrase 'loss of works' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of work' to express quantity properly.

× Maybe because it's kind of hassle to be honest, I I'm not the type of person like planning everything so I understand them because it's really hassle that making plans whenever you do something.

✓ Maybe because it's kind of a hassle to be honest, I'm not the type of person who likes planning everything so I understand them because it's really a hassle to make plans whenever you do something.

The word 'hassle' is a countable noun and requires an article 'a'. Also, 'like planning' should be 'likes planning' to agree with 'person'. The phrase 'that making plans' is incorrect; it should be 'to make plans'.

× Maybe because it's kind of hassle to be honest, I I'm not the type of person like planning everything so I understand them because it's really hassle that making plans whenever you do something.

✓ Maybe because it's kind of a hassle to be honest, I'm not the type of person who likes planning everything so I understand them because it's really a hassle to make plans whenever you do something.

The verb 'like' should be in third person singular form 'likes' to agree with the singular subject 'person'.

× Maybe because it's kind of hassle to be honest, I I'm not the type of person like planning everything so I understand them because it's really hassle that making plans whenever you do something.

✓ Maybe because it's kind of a hassle to be honest, I'm not the type of person who likes planning everything so I understand them because it's really a hassle to make plans whenever you do something.

After 'person who', the verb should be in the form 'likes planning' to express preference correctly.

× Umm, I prefer make a list on my phone because it's more comfortable, you know?

✓ Umm, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more comfortable, you know?

The verb 'prefer' is followed by the infinitive form 'to make', not the bare verb 'make'.