列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời câu trả lời hơi dài và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I have a good memory. For example, I try to remember all the items I need before I go shopping. However, when I buy many things, I sometimes forget some items.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng từ nối để liên kết ý. Hãy chú ý đến việc sử dụng thì và từ vựng phù hợp.

示例: Yes, I often make a list for my work, but I don't always follow it completely. Sometimes, I spend too much time on previous tasks and forget others, which causes confusion.

建议: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, câu không mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ mang tính tiêu cực như 'lazy' và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Hãy dùng từ nối để liên kết các ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn.

示例: Some people may not like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory. Also, they might find lists unnecessary if they can remember their tasks easily.

建议: Câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ, câu cuối không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have it with me. Also, reminder apps help me remember tasks at the right time.

× No, I'm not.

✓ No, I don't.

The student uses 'I'm not' which is incorrect in response to 'Do you make a list when you shop?'. The correct response should use the present simple tense 'I don't' to match the question's tense.

× Usually don't make a shopping list because I'm quite good at remembering everything I need mentally.

✓ I usually don't make a shopping list because I'm quite good at remembering everything I need mentally.

The sentence lacks a subject 'I' at the beginning, which is necessary for correct sentence structure.

× For example, I try to recall all the items I want to buy in my head.

✓ For example, I try to recall all the items I want to buy in my head.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× However, it's only worse when I'm buying a few things than just last.

✓ However, it's worse when I'm buying just a few things than last time.

The original sentence is unclear and awkward. The correction clarifies the comparison and corrects word order for better understanding.

× Yes, I quite often make a list for my work, but I'm not following all the list 100%.

✓ Yes, I quite often make a list for my work, but I don't follow the list 100%.

The phrase 'I'm not following' is incorrect here; the simple present 'I don't follow' is appropriate to express habitual action.

× Sometimes I spend too much time for us the previous works that I forgot the other works, so I will mess it up.

✓ Sometimes I spend too much time on the previous work that I forget the other tasks, so I mess it up.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect; 'spend time on' is correct. Also, 'works' should be 'work' or 'tasks' for countability and clarity. The tense is adjusted for consistency.

× Well I think they are lazy or they don't really know what they want to do.

✓ Well, I think they are lazy or they don't really know what they want to do.

A comma is needed after 'Well' to separate the introductory word from the rest of the sentence.

× And beside that some people are really good in remembering every in the remember everything.

✓ And besides that, some people are really good at remembering everything.

The phrase 'beside that' should be 'besides that'. Also, 'good in remembering every in the remember everything' is incorrect and redundant; corrected to 'good at remembering everything'.

× So they don't really need a list, they can remember every words on their head.

✓ So they don't really need a list; they can remember every word in their head.

'Every words' is incorrect; 'every' is followed by a singular noun 'word'. Also, 'on their head' should be 'in their head'.

× Oh, I will leave it.

✓ Oh, I will leave it.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× In the technology world, we all have the mobile phone on our hands every time.

✓ In the technological world, we all have mobile phones in our hands all the time.

'The technology world' should be 'the technological world'. 'The mobile phone' should be plural 'mobile phones' as it refers to everyone. 'On our hands' should be 'in our hands'. 'Every time' is better expressed as 'all the time'.

× So I prefer to make a list on the phone because I hold it every time and I have a reminder reminder apps on my phone.

✓ So I prefer to make a list on the phone because I have it with me all the time and I have reminder apps on my phone.

'I hold it every time' is awkward; 'I have it with me all the time' is better. Also, 'reminder reminder apps' is a repetition; corrected to 'reminder apps'.

× It will remind me at the right time at the right.

✓ It will remind me at the right time.

The phrase 'at the right' is incomplete and redundant; removing it makes the sentence correct.