列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和用词有些错误，影响了表达的自然性和准确性。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy and makes the shopping process more efficient.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和词汇，清晰表达意思。

示例: Yes, I used to make lists for my work when I was in primary school. I would break big tasks into smaller goals and write them down in my notebook to help me remember.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意主谓一致和词汇搭配。

示例: It depends on the person. Some people are lazy or find it difficult to make lists, while others have a good memory and prefer to remember tasks without writing them down.

建议: 回答表达了个人喜好，但句子结构和用词不够准确，影响表达效果。建议注意句子完整性和词汇选择，使表达更自然。

示例: I like both methods, but I prefer making lists on paper because I can decorate them with stickers. For example, when I travel, I make a paper list to share with my friends so we can decide where to go.

× I usually make a list when I go shopping because making lists can help me to remember what I want to buy and can makes the efficient of buying things.

✓ I usually make a list when I go shopping because making lists can help me to remember what I want to buy and can make the buying process more efficient.

这里的错误是动词形式错误，'can makes' 应该是 'can make'，因为情态动词后面接动词原形。并且 'the efficient of buying things' 表达不正确，应该改为 'the buying process more efficient'，使句子更通顺。

× Yes I do, I usually make a list for my work when I was primary school because I have some girls that was very big and I separate them into a small goals.

✓ Yes I do, I usually made a list for my work when I was in primary school because I had some goals that were very big and I separated them into smaller goals.

这里时态使用错误，描述过去的事情应该用过去时，'make' 应改为 'made'，'have' 改为 'had'，'was' 改为 'were'，'separate' 改为 'separated'。另外 'girls' 应为 'goals'，且 'small goals' 应为 'smaller goals'。

× Yes I do, I usually make a list for my work when I was primary school because I have some girls that was very big and I separate them into a small goals.

✓ Yes I do, I usually made a list for my work when I was in primary school because I had some goals that were very big and I separated them into smaller goals.

这里 'girls' 用错了，应该是 'goals'，因为上下文讲的是目标而不是女孩。

× Other things they have a strong to memorize to remember the things they want to do, so they don't make the list.

✓ Other people have a strong memory to remember the things they want to do, so they don't make a list.

这里 'have a strong to memorize to remember' 结构不正确，应该用 'have a strong memory to remember'，并且 'make the list' 应改为 'make a list'。

× Both of them that I really like, but I prefer to make a list on paper because I can put some sticker on the paper to make it more adorable.

✓ I like both of them, but I prefer to make a list on paper because I can put some stickers on the paper to make it more adorable.

'Both of them that I really like' 结构不正确，应该是 'I like both of them'。另外 'sticker' 应为复数 'stickers'。