列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答较为简短，且表达不够自然。建议在回答时直接回应问题，并适当补充理由，使回答更完整自然。例如，可以说明为什么不喜欢列购物清单。

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to pick items spontaneously based on what I feel like buying at the moment.

建议: 回答内容较丰富，但句子结构和表达有些不自然，且部分用词重复。建议简化句子，使用更地道的表达，并注意时态一致。

示例: Yes, I usually make a list in my physical planner before starting work. It helps me manage my time efficiently and gives me a sense of accomplishment when I complete all the tasks.

建议: 回答中有些表达不够流畅，且句子较长。建议使用更简洁的句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because it can cause anxiety, especially if they struggle to complete all the tasks. This might make them feel frustrated or even sad.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够自然的地方。建议注意介词使用和句子结构，使表达更准确流畅。

示例: I used to use calendar apps on my phone, but I often forgot to check them. So now, I prefer writing lists in a paper planner to remind myself of important tasks.

× I prefer to choose the goods and products accordingly to my pleasure.

✓ I prefer to choose the goods and products according to my pleasure.

短语“according to”是固定搭配，表示“根据”，不需要加“to”之后再加“accordingly”。这里多了一个“to”，属于介词使用错误。

× I have the habit of making a list on a physical planner every time before I start my work in this morning.

✓ I have the habit of making a list on a physical planner every time before I start my work this morning.

“in this morning”是不正确的表达，表示具体时间点时应直接用“this morning”，不加介词“in”。

× It really worked well.

✓ It really works well.

这里描述的是习惯性动作或一般事实，应该用一般现在时“works”，而不是过去时“worked”。

× It helped me manage my time efficiently and helped me release pleasure when I finish it and give me a sense of accomplishment after finishing all this schedule.

✓ It helps me manage my time efficiently and helps me release pleasure when I finish it and gives me a sense of accomplishment after finishing all this schedule.

句子中时态不一致，且主语“it”对应的谓语动词应保持一致，且“give me”应改为“gives me”，因为主语是单数。

× due to making this can give them a sense of anxiety

✓ making this can give them a sense of anxiety

“due to”后面应接名词或名词短语，这里用法不当，直接用“making this can give them a sense of anxiety”更合适。

× when they find themselves hard to finish all the lists they had to finish on that day

✓ when they find it hard to finish all the lists they have to finish on that day

“find”后面接形容词时需要有形式宾语“it”，且“had to”应改为“have to”表示当天的义务。

× I used to use calendar apps at my phone, but I found it didn't work well because I always forgot about this.

✓ I used to use calendar apps on my phone, but I found they didn't work well because I always forgot about them.

“use ... on my phone”是正确搭配，不能用“at”。“calendar apps”是复数，代词应使用“they”和“them”。

× So nowadays I use the paper planner for and write down some lists to keep me reminded of the important things.

✓ So nowadays I use the paper planner and write down some lists to keep me reminded of the important things.

“use ... for”后面应接用途，这里“for”多余，应去掉。