列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや不完全な文が見られます。例えば、「Instead of that」は「Instead」に修正し、最後の文は完結させる必要があります。また、具体的な理由や例を加えると良いでしょう。

示例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to shop spontaneously. Instead, I rely on my instincts and sometimes discuss with my wife or friends. This makes shopping more enjoyable and flexible.

建议: 回答は内容が明確で、理由も述べられていますが、文法の誤り（例えば、"many To Do List"は"many To-Do lists"）や表現の自然さに改善の余地があります。接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより良いです。

示例: Yes, I often make many to-do lists with my colleagues because sharing information helps us work more efficiently. This method is indispensable as it keeps everyone organized and on the same page. Without making lists, I might not complete my tasks as effectively.

建议: 文法や表現に多くの誤りがあります。例えば、「a process is very complicated」は「the process is complicated」に修正し、「some people are think」は「some people think」に直す必要があります。より具体的な理由や例を加え、接続詞で文をつなげましょう。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because the process can be complicated and time-consuming. Also, they think it's a waste of time and prefer to start working immediately. I can understand this perspective to some extent.

建议: 回答が不明瞭で、言い淀みや文法の誤りが多いです。例えば、「making a list」は「to make a list」に修正し、文を簡潔にまとめる必要があります。具体的な利点を明確に述べ、流暢さを意識しましょう。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my smartphone because it is very convenient. I can easily edit and add information anytime, which is not possible with paper lists.

× No, usually I don't make any lists about my shopping because I don't like to be limited by the list with my behavior.

✓ No, usually I don't make any lists for my shopping because I don't like to be limited by the list in my behavior.

The preposition 'about' is incorrectly used with 'lists'. The correct preposition is 'for' when referring to the purpose of the list. Also, 'with my behavior' should be 'in my behavior' to indicate limitation within behavior.

× Instead of that, I like to do shopping by my instinct and talking with my wife, friends and families.

✓ Instead of that, I like to do shopping by my instinct and by talking with my wife, friends, and family.

The sentence mixes verb forms and lacks parallel structure. 'By my instinct and talking' should be parallel, so 'by talking' is added. Also, 'families' should be 'family' as a collective noun here.

× It's very pleasant and.

✓ It's very pleasant.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the thought, which is a sentence structure error. The correction removes the incomplete conjunction.

× I often make many To Do List with my colleagues because sharing information helps us work more efficiently and smoothly.

✓ I often make many To Do Lists with my colleagues because sharing information helps us work more efficiently and smoothly.

The noun 'List' should be plural 'Lists' when preceded by 'many' to agree in number.

× This method is indispensable for me as it keeps every organized and on the same page.

✓ This method is indispensable for me as it keeps everyone organized and on the same page.

The word 'every' is incorrectly used; the correct word is 'everyone' to refer to all people collectively.

× Without making list, I might not be able to complete my tasks as efficiently.

✓ Without making a list, I might not be able to complete my tasks as efficiently.

The noun 'list' requires the indefinite article 'a' when singular and countable.

× And the reason why some people don't like making lists is that a process is very complicated and I take a lot of time.

✓ The reason why some people don't like making lists is that the process is very complicated and takes a lot of time.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'a process' instead of 'the process' to refer to a specific process. Also, 'I take a lot of time' is incorrect; it should be 'takes a lot of time' to agree with 'the process'.

× Also some people are think that making a list is a waste of time.

✓ Also, some people think that making a list is a waste of time.

The phrase 'are think' is incorrect; the correct form is 'think' without 'are' for present simple tense.

× Instead of that they should do the work.

✓ Instead, they should do the work.

'Instead of that' is awkward here; 'Instead' is the correct conjunction to contrast the previous idea.

× By reality I can understand that idea.

✓ In reality, I can understand that idea.

The phrase 'By reality' is incorrect; the correct prepositional phrase is 'In reality'.

× Umm, I prefer to, uh, making a list on my smartphone, umm, because this is very convenient and uh, uh, can you know, I can easily edit and, uh, add some information now on the screen and some are not taking apps is a very convenient and this is a good.

✓ Umm, I prefer to make a list on my smartphone because it is very convenient. I can easily edit and add information on the screen. Some note-taking apps are very convenient and useful.

The phrase 'prefer to making' is incorrect; after 'prefer to' the base verb 'make' should be used. The original sentence is also fragmented and unclear, so it is corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.