列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Sua resposta precisa ser mais clara e organizada. Evite repetições e complete suas frases para que a ideia fique completa. Use uma estrutura simples: responda diretamente, explique o motivo e dê um exemplo. Por exemplo, diga que você faz uma lista para economizar tempo e dinheiro, e explique como isso ajuda.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me save time and control my budget. For example, last week I avoided buying unnecessary items by following my list strictly.

建议: Sua resposta está boa, mas pode ser mais natural e fluida. Evite erros gramaticais e use conectores para ligar suas ideias. Por exemplo, use 'so' para mostrar consequência e 'such as' para dar exemplos.

示例: Yes, I make a list every morning at work, so I can organize my time and priorities. This helps me avoid distractions, such as checking my phone too often.

建议: Sua resposta tem muitas hesitações e erros que dificultam o entendimento. Tente falar frases completas e claras, usando vocabulário simples e correto. Explique as razões de forma organizada, usando conectores como 'because' e 'so'.

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember their tasks easily. Also, if they have a fixed daily routine, they may not need a to-do list.

建议: Sua resposta é clara, mas pode ser mais natural e fluida. Evite repetições e hesitações, e use conectores para ligar suas ideias. Por exemplo, use 'because' para explicar e 'for example' para dar um exemplo.

示例: I usually make my list on paper because it is easier for me to concentrate and organize my ideas. For example, when I use my phone, I get many notifications that distract me.

× I don't like to to spend my money with purchase unnecessary purchase.

✓ I don't like to spend my money on unnecessary purchases.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate the object of spending money is 'on'. Also, 'purchase' is repeated unnecessarily; it should be plural 'purchases' to match the context.

× So the list helped me when I.

✓ So the list helps me when I shop.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb and object after 'when I'. It should be completed to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, every morning I do a list at my work, because this way I can organize my time, I can organize my priorities and I avoid that, spend my time with something that distractions, for example.

✓ Yes, every morning I make a list at my work because this way I can organize my time, organize my priorities, and avoid spending time on distractions, for example.

The phrase 'do a list' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'make a list'. Also, 'avoid that, spend my time with something that distractions' is ungrammatical and should be corrected to 'avoid spending time on distractions'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I believe there's someone people, uh, have a good memory, so can uh, they can remember, uh, easily.

✓ I believe some people have a good memory, so they can remember easily.

'There's someone people' is incorrect; it should be 'some people'. Also, the phrase 'so can uh, they can' is redundant and ungrammatical; it should be 'so they can'.

× The other people umm, have uh, uh, daily routine in so far, then it's not necessary To Do List.

✓ Other people have a daily routine, so it's not necessary to have a to-do list.

The phrase 'daily routine in so far' is incorrect and unclear. It should be simplified to 'have a daily routine'. Also, 'To Do List' should be 'to-do list' and the sentence structure adjusted for clarity.

× I usually make my list on the paper because, uh, this way is easier to me, uh, to concentrate and organize my idea and uh, I, I can focus without distractions.

✓ I usually make my list on paper because this way it is easier for me to concentrate and organize my ideas, and I can focus without distractions.

The phrase 'on the paper' is incorrect; the article 'the' should be omitted. Also, 'easier to me' should be 'easier for me'. 'Organize my idea' should be plural 'ideas' to match the context.