列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo bhul haru chan jasle gardaa English natural ra effective hudaina. Tapai le tense ko prayog thik garna parcha ("went" ko sato "go" ya "go shopping"). Arko kura, tapai le 'make a lease' bhanda 'make a list' bhannu parcha. Tapai ko uttar lai 3-4 sentence samma simit garera, clear ra direct topic sentence ra supporting details dinu parcha. Linking words jastai 'because' ra 'so' ko prayog garera uttar lai logical banaunu parcha.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me save time. Also, it ensures that I don't forget anything important. This way, shopping becomes more organized and efficient.

建议: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garna parcha. 'Can be concentrate' ko sato 'can concentrate' bhannu parcha. Sentence lai chhoto ra clear banau, ra linking words jastai 'so' ya 'therefore' ko prayog garera uttar lai logical banaunu parcha. Arko kura, tapai le uttar lai 3-4 sentence samma simit garera, specific supporting details dinu parcha.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me focus better. By having a clear list, I avoid distractions and complete my tasks on time. Therefore, making a list improves my productivity.

建议: Tapai ko uttar ma clarity ra grammar ko samasya cha. 'I making a list' ko sato 'I think making a list' bhannu parcha. Sentence haru lai chhoto ra clear banau, ra linking words jastai 'because' ra 'but' ko prayog garera uttar lai logical banaunu parcha. Specific ra relevant supporting details dinu parcha.

示例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time. Instead, they prefer to do things spontaneously. However, I believe making a list is more beneficial because it helps me stay organized.

建议: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma thulo sudhar chahinchha. 'It make me more concentrate' ko sato 'it helps me concentrate more' bhannu parcha. Sentence haru lai chhoto ra clear banau, ra linking words jastai 'because' ra 'so' ko prayog garera uttar lai logical banaunu parcha. Arko kura, tapai le uttar lai 3-4 sentence samma simit garera, specific supporting details dinu parcha.

示例: Sometimes, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient. However, when I work on important tasks, I prefer paper lists because they help me concentrate better. So, I choose the method based on the situation.

× I make a list when I went for a shopping because usually when you when we make a lease it save our time and even we get to not focus or don't forget anything that we want to buy.

✓ I make a list when I go shopping because usually when we make a list it saves our time and helps us not to forget anything that we want to buy.

The phrase 'I went for a shopping' incorrectly uses past tense 'went' while the rest of the sentence is in present tense. It should be 'I go shopping' to maintain tense consistency. Also, 'make a lease' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. 'It save' should be 'it saves' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The phrase 'we get to not focus' is unclear and should be 'helps us not to forget'. In English, maintaining consistent tense within a sentence is important for clarity. Also, subject-verb agreement must be correct, and vocabulary should be accurate.

× because usually when you when we make a lease it save our time

✓ because usually when we make a list it saves our time

The verb 'save' should be 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'make a lease' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. In English, verbs in the third person singular present tense require an 's' at the end.

× Yes I make a list for my work also because if I make a list the list that I have to do while working then I can be concentrate more on my work rather than on unwanted thing and can complete my task on exact time and.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work also because if I make a list of the tasks that I have to do while working, then I can concentrate more on my work rather than on unwanted things and can complete my tasks on time.

The phrase 'can be concentrate' is incorrect; it should be 'can concentrate'. 'Unwanted thing' should be plural 'unwanted things' to match the context. 'Complete my task on exact time' should be 'complete my tasks on time' for natural expression. In English, modal verbs like 'can' are followed by the base form of the verb without 'be'. Also, plural forms should be used when referring to multiple items.

× But for me I making a list is more beneficial than doing a thing.

✓ But for me, making a list is more beneficial than doing a thing.

The phrase 'I making a list' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list'. The subject 'I' is unnecessary here because 'making a list' is a gerund phrase acting as the subject. In English, gerund phrases can act as subjects without a pronoun preceding them.

× Rather than that they usually go for the thing as it work for them I think.

✓ Rather than that, they usually go for things as it works for them, I think.

The phrase 'go for the thing' is unnatural; 'go for things' is better. 'It work' should be 'it works' to agree with singular subject 'it'. In English, prepositions and articles must be used correctly to convey meaning clearly, and subject-verb agreement must be maintained.

× because it make me more concentrate on the thing that I'm working on and be.

✓ because it makes me concentrate more on the thing that I'm working on.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Concentrate' should be used without 'more' after 'makes me'; 'concentrate more' is acceptable but better placed after 'me'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and be', which is incomplete and should be removed. In English, verbs must agree with their subjects, and sentences should be complete to convey clear meaning.