列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但句子结构不够自然，且有些用词不准确。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并且避免重复表达。

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to organize what I need and avoid buying unnecessary items.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复，句子不完整。建议简洁明了地表达习惯，并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I usually keep a planner where I list my tasks to help me remember appointments and deadlines.

建议: 回答内容较好，但语法和用词有小错误。建议注意时态和冠词的使用，使表达更准确自然。

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel stressed if they can't follow them, which makes them feel guilty.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够流畅的问题。建议使用正确的时态和连接词，使句子更自然。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because writing on paper and then throwing it away wastes resources.

× Yes, I'd like to tidy what I need before going shopping and to prevent buying something I don't need.

✓ Yes, I'd like to tidy up what I need before going shopping and to prevent buying something I don't need.

动词短语中缺少介词“up”，tidy up是固定搭配，表示整理。缺少“up”会导致表达不完整。建议记住常用动词短语搭配。

× Yes, I have a habit of keeping planners, keeping recording planners in my planner.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of keeping planners, recording plans in my planner.

句子结构混乱，重复使用“keeping”和“planners”导致表达不清。应简化为“keeping planners, recording plans”，使句子更通顺。建议注意句子结构的简洁和逻辑。

× I always list things I need to do recently in order to remember appointments and.

✓ I always list things I need to do recently in order to remember appointments.

句子末尾出现不完整的连接词“and”，导致句子不完整。应去掉“and”或补充完整内容。建议写作时注意句子完整性。

× I think maybe some people feel more stressed while making lists because if they can't manage to follow the list, they will feel a sense of guilty.

✓ I think maybe some people feel more stressed while making lists because if they can't manage to follow the list, they will feel a sense of guilt.

“a sense of guilty”中“guilty”是形容词，需用名词“guilt”表示“内疚感”。建议区分形容词和名词的用法。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think writing things on the paper and throw it away, it's a waste of resources.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think writing things on paper and throwing it away is a waste of resources.

“on the paper”应为“on paper”，表示泛指纸张；“throw”应改为动名词“throwing”与前面的“writing”保持一致。建议注意介词用法和动词形式一致性。