列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Старайтесь использовать более связные и грамматически правильные предложения. Избегайте повторений и уточняйте свои мысли более чётко, например, используя связки и правильные времена.

示例: To be honest, I don't always make a list when I go shopping. However, I find it essential when buying daily groceries to avoid forgetting anything. For other items like clothes, I usually shop without a list because I prefer to choose spontaneously.

建议: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и понятным. Избегайте неясных и неполных предложений. Используйте связки для логического перехода между идеями.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. It allows me to keep track of my tasks and ensures I don't forget important plans. However, the effectiveness depends on a person's discipline to follow the list.

建议: Старайтесь выражать мысли более ясно и использовать правильные грамматические конструкции. Добавляйте связки для плавного перехода между причинами.

示例: I think it depends on the person. Some people are too lazy to make lists, while others might avoid them because they feel uncomfortable if they don't follow the plan exactly.

建议: Используйте более точные выражения и грамматические формы. Избегайте фраз типа "That's all" в формальном ответе. Добавьте связки для улучшения связности.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient. I can easily search and access my lists anytime. On the other hand, paper lists can be misplaced or forgotten at home, which makes them less reliable.

× Actually I'm not a person who always make a list when I go to somewhere.

✓ Actually I'm not a person who always makes a list when I go somewhere.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'person'. Also, 'to somewhere' is incorrect; 'somewhere' does not require a preposition here.

× Actually I'm not a person who always make a list when I go to somewhere.

✓ Actually I'm not a person who always makes a list when I go somewhere.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before 'somewhere'. The correct phrase is 'go somewhere' without 'to'.

× But it's essential when you go to buy some daily foods.

✓ But it's essential when you go to buy some daily food.

The word 'food' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'foods' in this context.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work because it's really helpful. We can just buy your plans here.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because it's really helpful. We can just buy your plans here.

The sentence 'We can just buy your plans here.' is unclear and possibly incorrect but does not contain a clear grammar mistake from the provided list, so no correction is made.

× Works and like some plans, but I think it depends on person's discipline.

✓ Work and like some plans, but I think it depends on a person's discipline.

The word 'Works' should be singular 'Work' to match the context. Also, 'person's' needs an article 'a' before it.

× Works and like some plans, but I think it depends on person's discipline.

✓ Work and like some plans, but I think it depends on a person's discipline.

The phrase 'depends on person's discipline' requires the article 'a' before 'person's' to be grammatically correct.

× I think it hinges on people.

✓ I think it depends on people.

The verb 'hinges' is less appropriate here; 'depends' is more commonly used with 'on people'. However, 'hinges' is not a grammar error per se, so this is a style suggestion rather than a grammar correction.

× For some people it's really lazy and they don't want to do.

✓ For some people, they are really lazy and don't want to do it.

The pronoun 'it' is missing after 'do' to complete the verb phrase. Also, 'it's really lazy' is incorrect because 'it' does not refer to a person; 'they are really lazy' is correct.

× The second reason it's maybe they will not do that plan and they will feel very strange.

✓ The second reason is maybe they will not follow that plan and they will feel very strange.

The phrase 'it's maybe' is incorrect; it should be 'is maybe'. Also, 'do that plan' is awkward; 'follow that plan' is more appropriate.

× I prefer make a list on my phone because it's really convenient and suitable.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's really convenient and suitable.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to make' rather than the bare infinitive 'make'.

× I can in anytime search and find this information.

✓ I can search and find this information anytime.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The adverb 'anytime' should be placed at the end of the sentence.