列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Use correct verb forms and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details.

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping. However, my mother always prepares a list, whether it's for simple groceries or expensive items, to ensure she doesn't forget anything important.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your sentences and use clear expressions. Also, explain how making lists helps you at work with specific reasons.

示例: Yes, I sometimes make lists at work to organize my tasks. This helps me have a more productive and calm day because I know exactly what to do next.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete thoughts. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid vague phrases and explain your reasons more specifically.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to work flexibly and spontaneously. Additionally, some simply are not used to the habit of writing lists.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains errors. Avoid repeating previous points unnecessarily. Also, clarify your preference clearly and use correct grammar. Provide specific reasons for your choice.

示例: I prefer not to make lists because I like to work flexibly. However, when I do, I usually write them on paper because it helps me stay organized more effectively.

× I don't have habits of, uh, make a list when I go for a sub

✓ I don't have the habit of making a list when I go for a sub

The phrase 'habits of make' is incorrect because 'habits' is plural but the phrase requires a singular noun 'habit' and the verb should be in gerund form 'making' after 'of'. The correct phrase is 'the habit of making'. This improves grammatical accuracy and naturalness.

× my mom usually make some list to go shopping

✓ my mom usually makes some lists to go shopping

The subject 'my mom' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'makes' not 'make'. Also, 'some list' is incorrect; it should be 'some lists' or 'a list'. Here, 'some lists' fits better to indicate multiple lists.

× even it's a very simple grocery or to buy expensive products

✓ even if it's just simple groceries or buying expensive products

The phrase 'even it's' is incorrect; it should be 'even if it's'. Also, 'a very simple grocery' is incorrect because 'grocery' as a noun usually refers to a store or groceries (plural). The correction uses 'simple groceries' and 'buying' to maintain parallel structure.

× Uh, see things that it is crucial.

✓ Uh, I see that these things are crucial.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb structure. Adding 'I see that' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× my mom usually make some list to go shopping

✓ my mom usually makes some lists to go shopping

Repeated correction for subject-verb agreement and plural form of 'list' as above.

× I have to make notes as well as least what to do

✓ I have to make notes as well as a list of what to do

The phrase 'least what to do' is incorrect; it should be 'a list of what to do'. 'List' is countable and requires an article 'a' here.

× how to make my day more quiet, more qualitative

✓ how to make my day quieter and more productive

'More quiet' is better expressed as 'quieter' (comparative adjective). 'More qualitative' is awkward; 'more productive' or 'better quality' fits better in this context.

× some people don't like to make list

✓ some people don't like to make lists

'List' should be plural 'lists' because 'some people' implies multiple instances.

× some people don't have habits to make the list

✓ some people don't have the habit of making lists

'Habits to make the list' is incorrect; it should be 'the habit of making lists'. 'Habit' is singular here and 'making' is the gerund form.

× my mom usually make the list on paper

✓ my mom usually makes the list on paper

Subject 'my mom' requires verb 'makes' in third person singular form.

× CNJ doing her work stay organized

✓ and she does her work to stay organized

The phrase 'CNJ doing her work stay organized' is ungrammatical. It should be rephrased to 'and she does her work to stay organized' for clarity and correct sentence structure.