列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevabınız doğal ve anlaşılır ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve kelime seçimleri var. "ate" kelimesi yanlış kullanılmış, doğrusu "write" olmalı. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha akıcı yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz. Cümlenizi 5 cümleyi geçmeden daha etkili ve net hale getirmeye çalışın.

示例: No, I don't usually make a shopping list because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, I keep a wish list on my phone where I write items I want to buy in the future. This helps me remember what I need. Therefore, even if I shop spontaneously, I don't forget important things.

建议: Cevabınızda çok fazla dolgu kelimesi (umm, uh) kullanılmış ve bazı ifadeler dilbilgisi açısından hatalı. Ayrıca, cümleleriniz biraz dağınık ve net değil. Daha akıcı ve doğru cümleler kurmaya odaklanmalısınız. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlayın ve düşüncelerinizi daha açık ifade edin.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my homework because it motivates me. When I finish a task, I tick it off, which makes me feel confident. Also, making lists helps me remember all my assignments and avoid forgetting anything.

建议: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var. "making this" ifadesi yanlış, "making lists" olmalı. Ayrıca, "every people" yerine "everyone" kullanılmalı. Cümlelerinizi daha açık ve doğru kurmaya çalışın. Düşüncelerinizi desteklemek için daha spesifik örnekler verin ve bağlaçlar kullanın.

示例: In my opinion, making lists can be stressful for some people because everyone has a different personality. For example, people who are anxious might find lists annoying and prefer not to use them.

建议: Cevabınız açık ve anlaşılır, ancak "ticked" yerine "tick" kullanmalısınız çünkü genel alışkanlıklardan bahsediyorsunuz. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi bağlaçlarla daha akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz. Daha fazla detay ekleyerek cevabınızı zenginleştirebilirsiniz.

示例: I have two lists: one for my assignments and another for my wish list. I prefer to keep my assignment list on paper because when I tick off finished tasks, I feel motivated. However, I keep my wish list on my phone since it's more convenient and easy to update.

× I do keep A wish list on my phone where I ate items I want to buy in the future.

✓ I do keep a wish list on my phone where I add items I want to buy in the future.

The word 'ate' is the past tense of 'eat' and is incorrectly used here. The correct verb should be 'add' in the present tense to indicate the action of putting items on the list. This is a verb form error involving the past participle form.

× making this is really stressful habit and every people have a different personality.

✓ making this is a really stressful habit and every person has a different personality.

'Habit' is a singular noun and requires the article 'a'. 'Every people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural; 'every' should be followed by a singular noun like 'person'. Also, 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'every person'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× So if the person have a, a really stress and anxiety personality, uh, people shouldn't do the least because, uh, it's annoying.

✓ So if the person has a really stressful and anxious personality, people shouldn't make the list because it's annoying.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'person'. 'Stress' and 'anxiety' are nouns; to describe personality traits, adjectives 'stressful' and 'anxious' are appropriate. Also, 'do the least' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make the list'. This involves singular/plural agreement and incorrect adjective use.

× when I ticked my finished assignments, I feel motivated.

✓ when I tick my finished assignments, I feel motivated.

The verb 'ticked' is in the past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so the present tense 'tick' is appropriate. This is a past tense issue.