列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'rest'는 문맥에 맞지 않으며, 문장을 명확하고 간결하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 구체적인 이유나 예시를 추가하여 답변을 풍부하게 만드는 것이 좋습니다.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

建议: 답변이 질문에 직접적으로 답하지 않고 문장이 부자연스럽습니다. 'Does it work?'에 대한 명확한 답변과 구체적인 설명이 필요합니다. 문장을 연결하는 표현을 사용하여 논리적인 흐름을 만들어야 합니다.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.

建议: 답변이 문법적으로 틀리고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 질문에 맞는 이유를 명확하게 제시하고, 구체적인 상황을 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember things mentally.

建议: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'more direct'와 'It can have more than phone'의 의미가 불분명합니다. 이유를 구체적으로 설명하고, 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier to write quickly and I can see everything at once without unlocking my phone.

× Of course I make a list when I'm going to shop because the rest helps me to organize the product bought.

✓ Of course I make a list when I'm going shopping because the list helps me to organize the products bought.

'Going to shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'going shopping' because 'go' is followed by a gerund to indicate the activity. Also, 'the rest' seems to be a typo or incorrect word choice; it should be 'the list' to make sense in context. 'Product' should be plural 'products' because it refers to multiple items.

× You can help me to improve my skills to work.

✓ It can help me to improve my work skills.

The pronoun 'You' is incorrect here because the student is referring to the list, not the examiner. 'It' is the correct pronoun referring to the list. Also, 'skills to work' is awkward; 'work skills' is the proper phrase.

× Because Michael is very comfortable for some people and it doesn't work well in not efficient situation.

✓ Because making lists is very comfortable for some people and it doesn't work well in inefficient situations.

'Michael' is likely a typo for 'making lists'. 'Comfortable for' should be 'comfortable to' or better 'making lists is comfortable for'. 'Not efficient situation' should be 'inefficient situations' to use the correct adjective and plural form.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because paper is more direct and easy to access my work.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because paper is more direct and easy to access for my work.

The phrase 'easy to access my work' is missing the preposition 'for' to indicate purpose. It should be 'easy to access for my work'.

× It can have more than phone.

✓ It can hold more than a phone.

The sentence is unclear; likely the student means the paper list can hold more information than a phone. 'Have more than phone' is incorrect; 'hold more than a phone' or 'contain more than a phone' is better. Also, 'phone' needs an article 'a'.