列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và thiếu sự rõ ràng, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp về việc có hay không làm danh sách khi đi mua sắm, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết các ý một cách logic.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important. For example, last week I wrote down all the ingredients I needed for a recipe, which helped me shop efficiently.

建议: Câu trả lời không liên quan đến câu hỏi và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp về việc có làm danh sách cho công việc hay không và đánh giá hiệu quả của nó, kèm theo ví dụ cụ thể.

示例: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work, and it helps me stay organized and complete tasks on time. For instance, yesterday I listed my tasks and finished them all before the deadline.

建议: Câu trả lời không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên giải thích lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách, sử dụng các lý do cụ thể và liên kết các ý một cách mạch lạc.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to be spontaneous. For example, my friend avoids lists because she feels they limit her flexibility during the day.

建议: Câu trả lời không liên quan đến câu hỏi và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp về việc bạn thích làm danh sách trên giấy hay điện thoại, kèm theo lý do cụ thể và ví dụ minh họa.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit them. For instance, I use a note app to update my shopping list whenever I remember something.

× I'll tell all them I always taste them, then stand and dance, then away dance.

✓ I'll tell all of them I always taste them, then stand and dance, then dance away.

The phrase 'then away dance' is incorrect in word order and verb form. The correct form is 'then dance away' where 'dance' is the verb and 'away' is the adverb. Also, 'all them' should be 'all of them' to be grammatically correct.

× I'll tell all them I always taste them, then stand and dance, then away dance.

✓ I'll tell all of them I always taste them, then stand and dance, then dance away.

The pronoun 'them' is used incorrectly without a preposition. The correct phrase is 'all of them' to indicate the group being referred to.

× Dance. When I ask them I wanna dance, then in collapse dance, then they come sing.

✓ Dance. When I ask them I want to dance, then they collapse, then they come to sing.

The phrase 'in collapse dance' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It should be 'then they collapse' to indicate an action. Also, 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech.

× Dance. When I ask them I wanna dance, then in collapse dance, then they come sing.

✓ Dance. When I ask them I want to dance, then they collapse, then they come to sing.

The preposition 'in' before 'collapse dance' is incorrect and unnecessary. Also, 'come sing' should be 'come to sing' to correctly express purpose.

× We all makes mistakes with the wrong thing.

✓ We all make mistakes with the wrong thing.

The verb 'makes' does not agree with the plural subject 'we all'. The correct verb form is 'make' for plural subjects.

× Someone else, I was someone else and the one you don't have to try to become any else.

✓ Someone else, I was someone else and the one you don't have to try to become anyone else.

The pronoun 'any else' is incorrect. The correct pronoun is 'anyone else' to refer to another person.

× We say wrong, we do wrong thing, we can follow, we get up and we move on.

✓ We say wrong, we do the wrong thing, we can follow, we get up and we move on.

The phrase 'do wrong thing' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'wrong thing' to specify the noun.

× We all makes mistakes with the wrong thing.

✓ We all make mistakes with the wrong thing.

The verb 'makes' is incorrectly used with the plural subject 'we all'. The correct verb form is 'make' for plural subjects.