列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan gunakan kata-kata yang tepat untuk menghindari pengulangan dan kesalahan grammar. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan langsung ke inti jawaban.

示例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to pick items spontaneously. Although I sometimes start with a list, I often add things as I remember them, so I use the list only as a rough guide.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih natural dan efektif. Jelaskan alasan dengan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide.

示例: Although my job requires me to make lists, I find it difficult to follow this method. Therefore, I prefer to do tasks based on what I remember, as it is more effective for me.

建议: Perbaiki penggunaan kata dan struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan koheren. Gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide dan berikan contoh atau alasan yang lebih spesifik.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because everyone processes information differently. For example, I find that working in order doesn't help me be efficient, so I prefer to do tasks randomly at my own pace.

建议: Kurangi pengulangan dan filler seperti 'uh'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas dengan struktur yang tepat. Jelaskan alasan dengan kalimat yang efektif dan koheren.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily check my list anytime, unlike paper lists which I might forget or lose.

× I often randomly pick the stuff that I guess I need.

✓ I often randomly pick the stuff that I guess I need.

The word 'stuff' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form, so 'stuff' is correct here. No correction needed.

× I also need to buy another stuff too,

✓ I also need to buy other stuff too,

'Stuff' is uncountable, so 'another stuff' is incorrect. Use 'other stuff' to refer to additional uncountable items.

× I will not stick with the list that I made before.

✓ I will not stick with the list that I made before.

No singular/plural error here; 'list' is singular and correctly used.

× So I choose to just doing the stuff that I remember

✓ So I choose to just do the stuff that I remember

After 'choose to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form.

× rather than to.

✓ rather than that.

The phrase 'rather than to' is incomplete and incorrect here; it should be 'rather than that' or 'rather than doing so'.

× I guess it's because how we process the information and then the process of how we work on something is different.

✓ I guess it's because the way we process information and the way we work on something are different.

The original sentence has awkward structure; 'the way' is needed to correctly express the manner of processing and working, and subject-verb agreement must be maintained.

× So I while I do the stuff randomly based on my pace, I can do it more effectively.

✓ So while I do the stuff randomly based on my pace, I can do it more effectively.

The word 'I' after 'So' is unnecessary and disrupts sentence flow; removing it corrects the conjunction usage.

× I prefer to make the list on the phone because I know that I will always bring the phone with me.

✓ I prefer to make the list on my phone because I know that I will always bring my phone with me.

Use 'my phone' instead of 'the phone' to indicate possession; 'on my phone' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× So whenever I need to check on the list, then I'm gonna, uh, be able to reach my phone easily rather than using the paper because I I'm easy to forget and if I write it down on the paper, then I might lost the paper.

✓ So whenever I need to check the list, I can easily access my phone rather than using paper because I tend to forget, and if I write it down on paper, I might lose the paper.

'Check on the list' should be 'check the list'; 'reach my phone' is better as 'access my phone'; 'I I'm easy to forget' is incorrect and should be 'I tend to forget'; 'might lost' should be 'might lose'; 'using the paper' should be 'using paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here.