列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng thì đúng hơn và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I'm always make' và 'when I went'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go out because it helps me remember the important items I need to buy. This way, I avoid forgetting anything essential and also prevent unnecessary spending.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chính xác hơn, ví dụ như 'a to-do list' thay vì 'A to do list'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và có liên kết giữa các ý để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work, and it works very well. It helps me remember important tasks so I can prioritize them and manage my time more efficiently.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, ví dụ như giải thích đặc điểm tính cách ảnh hưởng đến việc không thích làm danh sách.

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because of their personality. They prefer to be spontaneous and don't like organizing tasks in order, so they avoid making lists and just do what they feel like.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, tránh lỗi như 'I'm usually make' và 'where the paper is make me feel'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có liên kết ý và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I usually make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can check it anytime. However, sometimes I prefer paper lists because writing things down helps me remember better and feel more motivated.

× Yes, I'm always make shopping list when I went to buy something because it's helped me to remember one thing that I prioritize and I should be good first and don't forget anything that is crucial.

✓ Yes, I always make a shopping list when I go to buy something because it helps me to remember the things that I prioritize and I should buy first and not forget anything that is crucial.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'I'm always make' should be 'I always make' to match present tense. 'Went' should be 'go' to maintain present tense consistency. 'It's helped' should be 'it helps' for present tense. Also, 'shopping list' needs an article 'a'. The verb forms must agree with the present habitual action described.

× Yes, I'm always make shopping list when I went to buy something because it's helped me to remember one thing that I prioritize and I should be good first and don't forget anything that is crucial.

✓ Yes, I always make a shopping list when I go to buy something because it helps me to remember the things that I prioritize and I should buy first and not forget anything that is crucial.

The noun 'shopping list' requires the indefinite article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun being mentioned for the first time.

× Yes, I'm always make shopping list when I went to buy something because it's helped me to remember one thing that I prioritize and I should be good first and don't forget anything that is crucial.

✓ Yes, I always make a shopping list when I go to buy something because it helps me to remember the things that I prioritize and I should buy first and not forget anything that is crucial.

The verb 'went' is past tense but the sentence describes a habitual action, so it should be in present tense 'go'.

× Yes, I'm always make shopping list when I went to buy something because it's helped me to remember one thing that I prioritize and I should be good first and don't forget anything that is crucial.

✓ Yes, I always make a shopping list when I go to buy something because it helps me to remember the things that I prioritize and I should buy first and not forget anything that is crucial.

The phrase 'I should be good first' is incorrect. It should be 'I should buy first' to express priority in buying items.

× Yes, I'm always make shopping list when I went to buy something because it's helped me to remember one thing that I prioritize and I should be good first and don't forget anything that is crucial.

✓ Yes, I always make a shopping list when I go to buy something because it helps me to remember the things that I prioritize and I should buy first and not forget anything that is crucial.

'One thing that I prioritize' should be plural 'the things that I prioritize' because usually multiple items are prioritized in a shopping list.

× Well, I make A to do list for my work and it was doing so great.

✓ Well, I make a to-do list for my work and it works so great.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'It was doing so great' should be 'it works so great' to maintain present tense consistency.

× Well, I make A to do list for my work and it was doing so great.

✓ Well, I make a to-do list for my work and it works so great.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'.

× You know that because students can help me to remember what thing is important and I will do it first and I think that I to a list can have me to spend time more efficiently.

✓ You know that because lists can help me to remember what things are important and I will do them first and I think that a to-do list can help me to spend time more efficiently.

'Students' is incorrect here; it should be 'lists'. Also, 'what thing is important' should be 'what things are important' for plural agreement. 'I to a list can have me' is incorrect; it should be 'a to-do list can help me'.

× You know that because students can help me to remember what thing is important and I will do it first and I think that I to a list can have me to spend time more efficiently.

✓ You know that because lists can help me to remember what things are important and I will do them first and I think that a to-do list can help me to spend time more efficiently.

'What thing is important' should be plural 'what things are important' because multiple tasks are implied.

× You know that because students can help me to remember what thing is important and I will do it first and I think that I to a list can have me to spend time more efficiently.

✓ You know that because lists can help me to remember what things are important and I will do them first and I think that a to-do list can help me to spend time more efficiently.

The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to refer to multiple important things.

× I think because about their characteristic, you know, that some people they don't have to put things in order and they would go on the floor so that they don't want to make a list because they can't remember anything or just they want to do what they like.

✓ I think it's because of their characteristics, you know, that some people don't have to put things in order and they would go with the flow so they don't want to make a list because they can't remember anything or they just want to do what they like.

'Because about their characteristic' is incorrect; it should be 'because of their characteristics'. 'Go on the floor' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go with the flow'. Also, 'some people they' is redundant; 'some people' suffices.

× I think because about their characteristic, you know, that some people they don't have to put things in order and they would go on the floor so that they don't want to make a list because they can't remember anything or just they want to do what they like.

✓ I think it's because of their characteristics, you know, that some people don't have to put things in order and they would go with the flow so they don't want to make a list because they can't remember anything or they just want to do what they like.

The preposition 'about' is incorrect after 'because'; it should be 'because of'. Also, 'go on the floor' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go with the flow'.

× Well, I'm usually make a list on my phone because I feel very inconvenient and comfortable for me and I can use my phone to check everyday.

✓ Well, I usually make a list on my phone because I feel very comfortable and it is convenient for me and I can use my phone to check every day.

'I'm usually make' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually make' to match present tense. 'Feel very inconvenient and comfortable' is contradictory and incorrect; it should be 'feel very comfortable and it is convenient'. 'Everyday' as one word is an adjective; here, the adverb 'every day' is correct.

× Well, I'm usually make a list on my phone because I feel very inconvenient and comfortable for me and I can use my phone to check everyday.

✓ Well, I usually make a list on my phone because I feel very comfortable and it is convenient for me and I can use my phone to check every day.

The adjective 'inconvenient' contradicts 'comfortable' and is incorrectly used. The correct expression is 'comfortable and convenient'.

× However, where the paper is make me feel motivated and I think it's one of the best way for us to memorize and it's something that we wrote down.

✓ However, paper makes me feel motivated and I think it's one of the best ways for us to memorize and it's something that we write down.

'Where the paper is make me' is incorrect; it should be 'paper makes me'. 'One of the best way' should be 'one of the best ways' because 'one of the' requires plural noun. 'We wrote down' should be 'we write down' to match present tense.