列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use more natural phrasing and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of saying 'I like to do a list and check it out,' say 'I like to make a list and tick off items as I shop.' Also, avoid unnecessary capitalization and articles.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list and tick off items as I buy them to stay organized.

建议: Focus on clearer sentence structure and correct grammar. Avoid repeating words like 'to to' and unnecessary capitalization. Also, clarify your answer by explaining how the list helps you.

示例: Yes, I used to make to-do lists in high school, which helped me manage my subjects and complete tasks on time.

建议: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say 'Some people are not organized, so they find it hard to complete all their tasks in one day.'

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they are not very organized, so they struggle to finish all their tasks in a day.

建议: Improve grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. For example, 'I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy ticking items off with a pen, which feels more satisfying than using a phone.'

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy ticking off items with a pen; it feels more satisfying than using a phone.

× Yes, sometimes I can't work without A to do list, so I like to do a list and check it out.

✓ Yes, sometimes I can't work without a to-do list, so I like to make a list and check it out.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' because it is not at the beginning of the sentence. Also, 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' because it is a compound noun. Additionally, 'do a list' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'make a list'.

× Absolutely. When I was in the high school, I used to to make A to do list and finish my subjects with my plan for To Do List.

✓ Absolutely. When I was in high school, I used to make a to-do list and finish my subjects with my plan for the to-do list.

The phrase 'in the high school' should be 'in high school' because 'high school' is a general concept and does not require 'the'. The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'used to to make' has a repeated 'to' which is incorrect. 'To Do List' should be lowercase and hyphenated as 'to-do list'.

× Because some people are not. Organization with them with with their minds, so they can't make all the job the same day, I think.

✓ Because some people are not organized in their minds, so they can't do all the jobs on the same day, I think.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and word choice. 'Are not organization with them with with their minds' is incorrect; it should be 'are not organized in their minds'. 'Make all the job' should be 'do all the jobs'. Also, 'the same day' should be 'on the same day'.

× I prefer make a list on a paper to check it, check it with the pen. I enjoy check the list by the pen.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper to check it, check it with a pen. I enjoy checking the list with a pen.

After 'prefer', the correct form is 'to make' not 'make'. 'On a paper' should be 'on paper' because 'paper' is uncountable here. 'Check it with the pen' should be 'check it with a pen' because it is not a specific pen. 'I enjoy check' should be 'I enjoy checking' because 'enjoy' is followed by a gerund (-ing form). 'By the pen' should be 'with a pen' as 'with' is the correct preposition for using an instrument.