列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'when I walking' nên là 'when I am walking'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I find it inconvenient to carry it around. However, I sometimes make a list when I need to buy many items for special occasions.

建议: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, 'I will might ignore it' không đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

示例: I usually don't make work lists because I tend to procrastinate. Even if I write a list, I often ignore it and leave tasks until the last minute.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi từ vựng ('making layers' thay vì 'making lists') và câu khá dài, khó hiểu. Bạn nên dùng câu ngắn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi từ vựng. Hãy giải thích rõ lý do và dùng từ nối để câu mạch lạc.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they procrastinate. Even if they try to be organized, they often lack motivation to write or follow the list.

建议: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý và câu bị ngắt quãng không hoàn chỉnh như 'The things that I need to do.' Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easier and more convenient to check. Paper lists can be easily lost or torn.

× I don't usually make the list when I shop because I find it a little bit inconvenient when I walking in the stalls holding the list and I just prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need.

✓ I don't usually make the list when I shop because I find it a little bit inconvenient when I am walking in the stalls holding the list and I just prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need.

The verb 'walking' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense correctly. Without 'am', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× I don't usually make the list when I shop because I find it a little bit inconvenient when I walking in the stalls holding the list and I just prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need.

✓ I don't usually make a list when I shop because I find it a little bit inconvenient when I am walking in the stalls holding the list and I just prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need.

The phrase 'make the list' should be 'make a list' because it refers to any list in general, not a specific one. Using 'the' implies a specific list which is not the case here.

× I'm a procrastinator person, so even when I have the list I will might ignore it and put up everything until the last minute.

✓ I'm a procrastinator person, so even when I have the list I might ignore it and put off everything until the last minute.

The modal verbs 'will' and 'might' cannot be used together. Also, the phrase 'put up everything' is incorrect; the correct phrasal verb is 'put off' meaning to delay.

× For example, if I write out everything for the thing I need to do for the day, I am not going to.

✓ For example, if I write out everything I need to do for the day, I am not going to do it.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb at the end. Adding 'do it' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I think that some people don't like making layers for the same reason as I do, because they tend to be the procrastinators just like me, so they will not have the motivation to write the list even though when they actually try to be organized and write down everything on the list, they still choose.

✓ I think that some people don't like making lists for the same reason as I do, because they tend to be procrastinators just like me, so they will not have the motivation to write the list even though when they actually try to be organized and write down everything on the list, they still choose not to.

The word 'layers' is incorrect; it should be 'lists'. Also, 'the procrastinators' should be 'procrastinators' without 'the' because it refers to people in general. The sentence also ends abruptly; adding 'not to' completes the thought.

× I think that some people don't like making layers for the same reason as I do, because they tend to be the procrastinators just like me, so they will not have the motivation to write the list even though when they actually try to be organized and write down everything on the list, they still choose.

✓ I think that some people don't like making lists for the same reason as I do, because they tend to be procrastinators just like me, so they will not have the motivation to write the list even though when they actually try to be organized and write down everything on the list, they still choose not to.

The verb 'choose' at the end should be followed by 'not to' to complete the meaning. Without it, the sentence is incomplete.

× If I had to choose, I would love to make a list on my phone because it would be easier and more convenient for me to check the list to access the items that I need to buy or the thing that I need.

✓ If I had to choose, I would love to make a list on my phone because it would be easier and more convenient for me to check the list to access the items that I need to buy or the things that I need.

The phrase 'the thing that I need' should be plural 'the things that I need' to match the plural 'items' and maintain consistency.

× If I have the paper I it will be easily torn out or lost.

✓ If I have the paper, it will be easily torn or lost.

The sentence has an extra pronoun 'I' which is incorrect. Also, 'torn out' is better as 'torn' in this context. Adding a comma after 'paper' improves readability.