列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中表达了观点，但语言不够自然，句子结构较复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。

示例: No, I don't usually make a shopping list because last time I did, I ended up buying more items than I planned. So now, I prefer to shop without a list.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，且表达不够清晰。建议注意主谓一致，使用更准确的时态和表达方式，同时补充更多细节使回答更完整。

示例: Yes, I have tried making lists for work, but it doesn't really suit me because as an ENTP, I often have to handle unexpected tasks.

建议: 回答不够清晰，逻辑混乱，且有语法错误。建议明确表达观点，避免使用不明确的缩写，补充具体原因并使用连词使句子连贯。

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous. For example, people with a flexible personality type like AP enjoy keeping flexible notes instead of strict lists.

建议: 回答中有语法和表达不连贯的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免断句错误，使用连词使表达更流畅。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I don't carry paper with me all the time. My phone is always with me, so it's more convenient to use it for lists.

× ...there's many more things in my bags than the list...

✓ ...there are many more things in my bags than on the list...

这里的主语是复数（many more things），所以谓语动词应该用复数形式are，而不是there's（there is的缩写）。另外，比较时应该用介词on the list而不是than the list。

× ...so I will never use the list after.

✓ ...so I will never use the list again.

这里的表达中，'after'用法不当，应该用again表示“再一次”，更符合英语习惯。

× Yes I was trying it but you know my MBTI is ENTP so using a list were not suitable for me because I always do something unexpected.

✓ Yes, I tried it but you know my MBTI is ENTP so using a list was not suitable for me because I always do something unexpected.

这里描述过去的动作，应该用一般过去时tried而不是进行时was trying。主语using a list是单数，谓语动词应该用was而不是were。

× In my opinion, I think they must. MBTI has AP in it and they always like doing things spontaneously and they prefer to keep flexible notes that allow them to.

✓ In my opinion, I think they must. MBTI has AP in it and they always like doing things spontaneously and they prefer to keep flexible notes that allow them to do so.

句子末尾缺少动词短语，'allow them to'后面需要跟动词不定式，补充'do so'使句子完整。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I will not take a paper everywhere when I'm doing something so, but my phone can always. On my hand, so using the phone is more convenient.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I will not take paper everywhere when I'm doing something, but my phone is always with me. So using the phone is more convenient.

原句结构混乱，'a paper'应改为不可数名词'paper'，'my phone can always. On my hand'不完整且语序错误，改为'my phone is always with me'更通顺。句子连接词使用也需调整。