列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating words like "deadlines" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like "because" and "for example" appropriately to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be careful with word choice, such as "tests" which might be a mistake for "tasks."

示例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important tasks. For example, when I have multiple deadlines, having a list allows me to prioritize my work and manage my time more efficiently.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors, making it difficult to understand. Try to give a direct response with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Use simple and correct sentences, and avoid vague phrases. For example, explain that some people find list-making time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because it takes extra time and they prefer to remember things in their head. Also, they might find lists boring or unnecessary.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and correct word forms, such as "better" instead of "more good," and "lose" instead of "lost." Use linking words like "because" and "therefore" to connect ideas logically.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me, and I am less likely to lose it compared to paper. Therefore, writing lists on my phone is more convenient and reliable.

× For example, when I have a multiplied deadlines deadlines, having a list allows me to manage my time for more efficiently.

✓ For example, when I have multiple deadlines, having a list allows me to manage my time more efficiently.

The phrase 'multiplied deadlines deadlines' is incorrect. The correct plural form is 'multiple deadlines'. Also, 'for more efficiently' is incorrect; it should be 'more efficiently' without 'for'. This correction fixes the plural noun and removes unnecessary preposition for proper grammar.

× Because it takes the time and every time we can see the lease and other people don't like chosen to take place and they take times maybe.

✓ Because it takes time, and every time we see the list, some people don't like to do it and it may take too much time.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Lease' should be 'list', 'chosen to take place' is incorrect and unclear, and 'they take times maybe' is ungrammatical. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure for better understanding.

× At least for me it's more good to make list on phone because phone all time is by my side and paper maybe I can lost.

✓ At least for me, it's better to make a list on my phone because my phone is always by my side, and I might lose paper.

'More good' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'better'. 'Make list' needs an article 'a list'. 'Phone all time is by my side' is awkward; 'my phone is always by my side' is correct. 'Paper maybe I can lost' is ungrammatical; 'I might lose paper' is correct.

× And for this reason it's good to write your list on phone.

✓ And for this reason, it's good to write your list on your phone.

The phrase 'on phone' is missing the possessive pronoun 'your'. The correct prepositional phrase is 'on your phone' to indicate possession.