列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use clearer sentence structures. For example, instead of saying "I'm not usually a person who writes anything and I'm not good with writing," you could say "I usually don't make lists because I don't like writing."

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously and I don't like writing things down.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more fluent. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar mistakes, such as "a full of stress a day" should be "a very stressful day." Also, clarify the last sentence for better understanding.

示例: I don't usually make lists for work, but when I'm very busy and stressed, I write down my tasks before going to the office. This helps me stay organized and focused throughout the day.

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating the same point. Also, provide more specific reasons why some people dislike making lists.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because it requires time and effort, and they may find it boring or unnecessary. Additionally, it depends on their personality; some prefer to be spontaneous rather than organized.

建议: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and grammatically correct. For example, say "because my phone is always with me" and "so it's not necessary to make a list on paper." Also, you can add a linking phrase to improve coherence.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's always with me, so I don't need to carry paper lists around.

× Usually not. I'm not usually a person who writes anything and I'm not good with writing so usually I don't prepare, at least before my shop.

✓ Usually not. I'm not usually a person who writes anything and I'm not good at writing, so usually I don't prepare, at least before I go shopping.

The phrase 'good with writing' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'good at writing'. Also, 'before my shop' is unclear and should be 'before I go shopping' to correctly express the time reference.

× That's not my habit, but sometimes and occasionally when I'm very busy and I have a full of stress a day, I usually write my tasks before go to my workplace.

✓ That's not my habit, but sometimes, when I'm very busy and have a stressful day, I usually write my tasks before going to my workplace.

The phrase 'a full of stress a day' is incorrect; it should be 'a stressful day'. Also, 'before go to my workplace' lacks the gerund form; it should be 'before going to my workplace'.

× Yes, it works and it's clear everything for.

✓ Yes, it works and everything is clear.

The phrase 'it's clear everything for' is ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'everything is clear' to convey clarity.

× Making list is a habit and it's related to their personality and it's not a forceful thing.

✓ Making lists is a habit and it's related to their personality and it's not a forceful thing.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists.

× And people usually don't like make list and sometimes it takes a lot of time.

✓ And people usually don't like to make lists and sometimes it takes a lot of time.

After 'don't like', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to make'. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists'.

× And people usually don't like make list and sometimes it takes a lot of time.

✓ And people usually don't like to make lists and sometimes it takes a lot of time.

Same as above: 'list' should be plural 'lists'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone always with me and I usually carry it, so it doesn't necessary to make a list on the paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is always with me and I usually carry it, so it's not necessary to make a list on paper.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'my phone'. Also, 'doesn't necessary' is incorrect; it should be 'it's not necessary'. The phrase 'on the paper' should be 'on paper' without the article.