列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答有些语法错误，表达不够自然，且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并注意时态和词序。

示例: I usually don't make a shopping list because shopping is very convenient nowadays. I can buy what I need anytime, so I don't think making a list is necessary.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I usually make a list at work because my job is very demanding. Making a list helps me remember important tasks and improves my efficiency.

建议: 回答语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议先明确观点，再用具体例子支持，注意句子结构和时态。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because shopping is very convenient nowadays. For example, they can shop online anytime, so they don't feel the need to plan ahead.

建议: 回答中有语法和表达不自然的问题。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更清晰。

示例: Nowadays, I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient. I always have my phone with me, so I can check my list anytime easily.

× In fact, at that time I didn't usually make a list of when I shop, because nowadays shopping is very convenient and I can buy something when whenever I want, so sometimes I don't think it's very necessary.

✓ In fact, at that time I didn't usually make a list when I shopped, because nowadays shopping is very convenient and I can buy something whenever I want, so sometimes I don't think it's very necessary.

这里的时间状语是过去时态（"at that time"），所以动词"shop"应使用过去式"shopped"。另外，"when whenever"重复，应去掉"when"。

× Yes, I usually make a list at my work because my work has highly demanding every day.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list at my work because my work is highly demanding every day.

"work"是不可数名词，不能用"has"表示拥有，应该用系动词"is"来描述状态。

× Yes, I usually make a list at my work because my work has highly demanding every day.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list at my work because my work is highly demanding every day.

"at my work"用法可以接受，但更常见的是"at work"，这里保留原句结构。

× So making a list can help me forget some more important things and make the work very efficient and convenient.

✓ So making a list can help me remember some more important things and make the work very efficient and convenient.

"forget"与句意不符，应为"remember"，因为列清单是为了帮助记住重要的事情。

× I think the main reason for some people don't like making this because in today's society shopping is very convenient people.

✓ I think the main reason why some people don't like making lists is because in today's society shopping is very convenient.

句子结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，"making this"不明确，应改为"making lists"，并调整句子结构使其完整。

× People can doing it whenever, when they want to go for example online shopping and nearby.

✓ People can do it whenever they want, for example, online shopping or nearby.

情态动词"can"后应接动词原形，不能用"doing"。另外，句子结构混乱，需调整使其通顺。

× In fact, nowadays I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient as sometimes I hold the phone for many time in day.

✓ In fact, nowadays I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient as sometimes I hold the phone for a long time during the day.

"many time"应为"a long time"或"many times"，且"in day"应为"during the day"。

× So I use the phone is very easy and I can use it timely.

✓ So using the phone is very easy and I can use it timely.

"I use the phone is very easy"结构错误，应改为"using the phone is very easy"，使句子主语和谓语一致。