列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但存在语法错误和重复用词，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time and avoid buying things impulsively.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“chat list”和“job classes”，影响表达清晰度。建议使用正确词汇并简洁表达。

示例: Yes, I always make a checklist before starting work to ensure I don't miss any tasks assigned by my supervisor and to track my progress.

建议: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，逻辑不连贯。建议理清思路，使用简单句子表达原因，并注意连贯性。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find tasks quick and easy, so they think making a list wastes time.

建议: 回答中缺少完整句子，表达不清晰，且有语法错误。建议明确表达偏好并给出具体理由，使用连贯句子。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because electronic lists are less likely to get lost, and I can easily access and edit them anytime.

× I do make a checklist when I do shopping.

✓ I do make a checklist when I go shopping.

这里'shopping'是不可数名词，前面不需要加'do'，应该用动词短语'go shopping'表示去购物。

× First it can reduce the time while shopping to prevent impulse purchasing.

✓ First, it can reduce the time spent shopping to prevent impulse purchasing.

'reduce the time while shopping'表达不准确，应该用'reduce the time spent shopping'表示减少购物所花费的时间。

× Second, it can allow me to buy buy this the goods and food without any time wasted as as short.

✓ Second, it can allow me to buy the goods and food without wasting any time.

句子中有重复单词' buy buy'，'this the goods'用法错误，应该用'the goods'，'without any time wasted as as short'表达不通顺，改为'without wasting any time'更自然。

× Yes, I always make a chat list when I before starting of work.

✓ Yes, I always make a checklist before starting work.

'chat list'应为'checklist'，'when I before starting of work'结构错误，应该是'before starting work'。

× First, it can make sure I don't miss out any job classes that the superior authorized me to do.

✓ First, it can make sure I don't miss any tasks that my superior authorized me to do.

'job classes'用词不当，应该用'tasks'，'miss out any'改为'miss any'更合适。

× Second, it can check my progress when the work is done.

✓ Second, it helps me check my progress while the work is in progress.

'when the work is done'与上下文不符，应该是工作进行时检查进度，用'while the work is in progress'更合适。

× I can double check if there are any missing pages left.

✓ I can double-check if there are any pages missing.

'missing pages left'表达重复，'pages missing'更简洁。

× People don't like making this due to the task is quick and easy and which is not time consuming to complete the job that disappear assigns them to do.

✓ People don't like making lists because the tasks are quick and easy and not time-consuming to complete.

句子结构混乱，'making this'应为'making lists'，'disappear assigns them to do'无意义，改为简洁表达。

× That's the first reason. Secondly, they think making a list would be so time wasting.

✓ That's the first reason. Secondly, they think making a list is a waste of time.

'time wasting'用法不当，应该用'a waste of time'表达浪费时间。

× I do prefer to make the checklist on the because firstly, it is electronic, it is not easy to get lost.

✓ I prefer to make the checklist on my phone because, firstly, it is electronic and not easy to get lost.

'on the'缺少名词，应该是'on my phone'，并且句子需要连接词使其通顺。

× Secondly, when writing on paper, the words may be ambiguous and may forgot the behind meaning of it, while using can say everything you can into the Internet.

✓ Secondly, when writing on paper, the words may be ambiguous and I may forget the meaning behind them, while using my phone I can save everything on the Internet.

句子结构混乱，'may forgot'应为'may forget'，'may forgot the behind meaning'表达错误，'using can say everything you can into the Internet'不通顺，改为'using my phone I can save everything on the Internet'。