列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use correct grammar such as 'it is very convenient' instead of 'it's a very convenient' and 'it avoids me' instead of 'it avoiding me'. Keep your answer concise and clear.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it saves time and helps me avoid buying unnecessary items. This method is very useful for me.

建议: Good answer with clear structure. However, watch your verb tenses; use present tense 'I create' instead of 'I created' for daily routines. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily, for example, 'prioritize' twice in a row. Use linking words like 'therefore' to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, of course. Every day I create a detailed work plan which helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important tasks. Therefore, my day becomes productive and I can prioritize my work to complete everything on time.

建议: Try to complete your sentences fully and avoid pauses or incomplete thoughts. Use linking words like 'because' or 'since' to explain reasons clearly. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and try to give specific reasons or examples.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time. They prefer to keep everything in their mind and go with the flow, feeling that writing things down is unnecessary.

建议: Clarify your meaning by using common expressions like 'on paper' instead of 'black and white'. Also, explain why paper is easier for you with specific reasons. Avoid short, unclear sentences and connect ideas logically.

示例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it is more memorable and easier for me to use. As a busy person, I find writing on paper quicker than using my phone.

× Yes, I do, uh, for me, umm, making, creating a list, uh, it's a very convenient for me because it saves my time and it avoiding me to buy unnecessary, uh, items and uh, I think it's very useful for me.

✓ Yes, I do, uh, for me, umm, making or creating a list, uh, is very convenient for me because it saves my time and it prevents me from buying unnecessary, uh, items and uh, I think it's very useful for me.

The phrase 'making, creating a list' should use 'or' to connect the gerunds properly. 'It's a very convenient' is incorrect because 'convenient' is an adjective and needs no article 'a' here; it should be 'is very convenient'. 'It avoiding me' is incorrect; the verb should be 'prevents me from' to express prevention correctly.

× Yes, of course. Every day I created a detailed work plan for my day. It helps me to stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important task.

✓ Yes, of course. Every day I create a detailed work plan for my day. It helps me to stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important task.

The sentence refers to a habitual action, so the present tense 'create' should be used instead of the past tense 'created'.

× It helps me to stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important task.

✓ It helps me to stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important tasks.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple important tasks that might be forgotten.

× This method makes my day very productive and successful, so I can prioritize. Prioritize my work and complete everything on time.

✓ This method makes my day very productive and successful, so I can prioritize my work and complete everything on time.

The sentence is fragmented; 'Prioritize' should be connected to the previous sentence to form a complete sentence.

× Some people don't like making lists. They think it's a waste of time and they like to keep. Everything in their mind and go, they prefer to go with the flow and from their point of view writing it can feel unnecessary and.

✓ Some people don't like making lists. They think it's a waste of time and like to keep everything in their mind and go; they prefer to go with the flow, and from their point of view, writing it down can feel unnecessary.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper punctuation. 'They like to keep.' is incomplete and should be connected to 'everything in their mind and go'. Also, 'writing it' should be 'writing it down' for clarity.

× I prefer to create the list black and white as it is very memorable and it's very easy for me.

✓ I prefer to create the list in black and white as it is very memorable and it's very easy for me.

The phrase 'black and white' needs the preposition 'in' to indicate the format or style of the list.

× As a busy person, I don't use my phone.

✓ As a busy person, I don't use it (my phone) for making lists.

The sentence is grammatically correct but lacks clarity. Adding 'for making lists' clarifies the context, and 'it' can be used to avoid repetition.