列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn, ví dụ như sửa 'I'm not forget' thành 'I don't forget'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh thừa từ và nên dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me not to forget anything important. For example, I categorize items into groups like fruits and vegetables to make my shopping more efficient.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, ví dụ sửa 'my workloads is quite healthy' thành 'my workload is quite heavy'. Hạn chế dùng từ thừa và tránh lặp lại ý. Sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because my workload is quite heavy. I find it helpful to keep track of important tasks on my phone, which is very convenient.

建议: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, sửa 'that looking in the long list' thành 'looking at a long list'. Ngoài ra, nên dùng từ phù hợp như 'stressful' thay vì 'stressful' và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'feel an active'.

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because looking at a long list of unfinished tasks can make them feel overwhelmed. This can lead to stress and lack of motivation. For example, when people see many tasks undone, they may feel reluctant to start.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, sửa 'that I still not done' thành 'that I have not done yet'. Hạn chế lặp từ và dùng liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always keep it nearby. Digital lists are convenient since I can set reminders and get notifications for tasks I haven't completed yet.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me to ensure that I'm not forget to buy anything important.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me to ensure that I'm not forgetting to buy anything important.

The verb 'forget' should be in the '-ing' form 'forgetting' after 'I'm not' to correctly express the continuous negative action.

× For example, I usually make a list of and categorize it into groups like fruits and vegetables to make my shopping more efficient.

✓ For example, I usually make a list and categorize it into groups like fruits and vegetables to make my shopping more efficient.

The phrase 'make a list of and categorize it' is incorrect; 'make a list and categorize it' is correct. The original sentence has an unnecessary 'of' causing confusion.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work because my workloads is quite healthy.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because my workload is quite heavy.

The noun 'workloads' should be singular 'workload' to agree with the singular verb 'is'. Also, 'healthy' is incorrect here; 'heavy' is the appropriate adjective to describe a large amount of work.

× So I think make a list of important ideas for me to keep track on what I need to do and what needs to be done.

✓ So I think making a list of important ideas helps me keep track of what I need to do and what needs to be done.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject and verb structure. Using 'making a list' as a gerund subject and correcting prepositions improves clarity and grammar.

× And I usually make a list on my phone to take note that, uh, and it's quite convenient for me to keep track.

✓ And I usually make a list on my phone to take notes, and it's quite convenient for me to keep track.

The phrase 'take note that' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'take notes'. Also, the sentence is improved by removing unnecessary fillers and clarifying meaning.

× I think people are not fond of making a list because sometimes that looking in the long list of tasks that haven't then made me feel overwhelmed.

✓ I think people are not fond of making a list because sometimes looking at the long list of tasks they haven't done makes me feel overwhelmed.

The verb 'looking' should be followed by the preposition 'at'. Also, 'then made me feel' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me feel' to agree with the subject 'looking'.

× I think people are not fond of making a list because sometimes that looking in the long list of tasks that haven't then made me feel overwhelmed.

✓ I think people are not fond of making a list because sometimes looking at the long list of tasks they haven't done makes me feel overwhelmed.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'at' after 'looking'. Also, 'that' is unnecessary and confusing in this context.

× This will lead to stressful and uninspired.

✓ This will lead to stress and feeling uninspired.

'Stressful' and 'uninspired' are adjectives; the sentence requires nouns or noun phrases. 'Stress' (noun) and 'feeling uninspired' correctly express the intended meaning.

× For example, when people looking at the list that they haven't done, they will feel an active to do it.

✓ For example, when people look at the list of tasks they haven't done, they will feel unmotivated to do it.

The verb 'looking' should be 'look' to agree with 'when people'. Also, 'an active' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'unmotivated' or 'inactive'.

× I only keep my phone by my side, so I think that I prefer to make a list on my phone which is digital list because I can set a reminder and it will give me a notification about the task that I still not done and make a list on my phone will be convenient, more convenient for me to keep.

✓ I always keep my phone by my side, so I prefer to make a list on my phone, which is a digital list, because I can set reminders and it will give me notifications about tasks that I have not yet done. Making a list on my phone is more convenient for me.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'still not done' should be 'have not yet done' (present perfect tense), 'make a list on my phone will be convenient, more convenient' is awkward and corrected to 'Making a list on my phone is more convenient'. Also, articles and plural forms are corrected for clarity.