列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'makes me to choose' 대신 'helps me choose'를 사용하고, 'unnecessary things' 앞의 'something'은 불필요합니다. 또한, 문장이 다소 길고 중복된 표현이 있으니 간결하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me choose items more easily and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

建议: 문법과 표현에 오류가 있습니다. 'I use list'는 'I use a list'로 수정해야 하며, 'makes me prevent wasting of time' 대신 'helps me avoid wasting time'이 자연스럽습니다. 문장을 더 명확하고 간결하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work and it really helps. For example, when I prepare for tests, using a list helps me avoid wasting time and study more efficiently.

建议: 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'may don't like'는 'may not like'로 수정해야 하며, 문장이 다소 어색합니다. 또한, 'like scheduling the time and making a list' 부분은 명확하지 않으므로 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: Some people may not like making lists because the process can be difficult for them. For example, scheduling tasks and organizing them in a list might feel like a burden.

建议: 문법과 표현에 오류가 있습니다. 'a app'는 'an app'으로 수정해야 하며, 'more easy'는 'easier'가 맞습니다. 또한, 문장이 다소 중복되고 어색하니 간결하고 자연스럽게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone. Usually, I used to write lists on paper, but after I started using an app called Notion, it became easier to check my lists regularly.

× making a list makes me to choose something to buy more easy and also prevents me from buying something unnecessary things.

✓ making a list makes it easier for me to choose something to buy and also prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

'makes me to choose' is incorrect; after 'make', the verb should be in base form without 'to'. Also, 'more easy' should be 'easier' as the comparative form of 'easy'. 'Unnecessary things' should not have 'something' before it as it is redundant.

× prevents me from buying something unnecessary things.

✓ prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

Using both 'something' and 'things' together is redundant. 'Unnecessary things' alone is sufficient and grammatically correct.

× Actually I use list when I prepare my test as a student and it makes me prevent wasting of time and study more efficiently so it works well.

✓ Actually, I use a list when I prepare for my tests as a student, and it helps me prevent wasting time and study more efficiently, so it works well.

'use list' needs an article 'a list'. 'prepare my test' should be 'prepare for my tests'. 'prevent wasting of time' should be 'prevent wasting time'. Commas are added for clarity.

× Some people may don't like to make a list because the process of making lists can be a little bit difficult for them.

✓ Some people may not like to make a list because the process of making lists can be a little bit difficult for them.

'may don't' is incorrect; modal verbs like 'may' are followed by the base form of the verb without 'do/does'. The correct form is 'may not like'.

× Actually, umm, usually I prefer to make a list of my paper, but after I used a app named Notion, making a list on my phone was more easy to check consistently.

✓ Actually, umm, usually I prefer to make a list on paper, but after I used an app named Notion, making a list on my phone was easier to check consistently.

'make a list of my paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on paper'. 'a app' should be 'an app' because 'app' starts with a vowel sound. 'more easy' should be 'easier' as the comparative form of 'easy'.