列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit long and slightly unclear. Try to be more concise and use correct grammar. For example, say "I make a list before shopping because I tend to buy unnecessary things without it, which wastes my money."

示例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because without it, I tend to buy things I don't really need, which wastes my money.

建议: Your answer has some unclear words and grammar mistakes. Avoid irrelevant or incorrect words like "alcoholic." Try to clearly explain how making lists helps you. For example, "I make lists for my tasks because it helps me organize my work and complete it on time, which boosts my confidence."

示例: Yes, I make a list for every task because it helps me organize my work and finish it within the deadline, which makes me feel confident.

建议: Your answer is understandable but a bit wordy and has grammar errors. Try to be more concise and correct. For example, "Some people dislike making lists because they have good memory and can remember tasks easily, so they find making lists unnecessary."

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember their tasks without writing them down.

建议: Your answer is mostly clear but has some repetition and grammar mistakes. Try to be more fluent and avoid repeating words. For example, "I used to make lists on paper as a child, but now I prefer my phone because I always carry it and paper can be lost or damaged."

示例: I used to make lists on paper when I was a child, but now I prefer using my phone because I always have it with me, and paper can easily get lost or damaged.

× I am kind of picky person and I buy everything which I see on the market which maybe not very much essential.

✓ I am kind of a picky person and I buy everything that I see on the market which may not be very essential.

The phrase 'picky person' requires an article 'a' before it because 'person' is a singular countable noun. Also, 'which' should be replaced with 'that' for defining clauses, and 'maybe' should be 'may be' as two words to indicate possibility.

× And this kind of action is not economic, is not economical and I lost my money.

✓ And this kind of action is not economical and I lose my money.

The adjective 'economic' relates to the economy, while 'economical' means saving money or resources, which fits better here. Also, the tense should be consistent; 'lost' is past tense but the context suggests a general statement, so 'lose' is appropriate.

× Yes, I really do make a list before going to shopping because I am kind of picky person

✓ Yes, I really do make a list before going shopping because I am kind of a picky person

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'going shopping' without 'to' because 'go' is followed by the gerund form of the verb when indicating activities.

× I buy everything which I see on the market which maybe not very much essential.

✓ I buy everything that I see on the market which may not be very essential.

The phrase 'very much essential' is incorrect; 'essential' is an adjective and should be modified by 'very' alone, not 'very much'. Also, 'which' should be 'that' for defining clauses.

× I really do make a list for my every task I do because I feel making a list is a professional and organizational way of completing the task in a given time frame, which makes me feel confident and alcoholic.

✓ I really do make a list for every task I do because I feel making a list is a professional and organized way of completing the task in a given time frame, which makes me feel confident and accomplished.

The word 'organizational' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'organized' to describe the way of completing tasks. Also, 'alcoholic' is a wrong word choice; likely intended was 'accomplished' or 'motivated'.

× I really do make a list for my every task I do

✓ I really do make a list for every task I do

The phrase 'my every task' is incorrect; the correct form is 'every task' without 'my' because 'every' already implies all individual items.

× some people might have extra little memory power so that they could easily remember everything they have to do, so they find this work much more difficult.

✓ some people might have a little extra memory power so that they can easily remember everything they have to do, so they find this work much less difficult.

The phrase 'extra little memory power' is awkward; 'a little extra memory power' is correct. Also, 'could' suggests past possibility, but present ability 'can' fits better. The conclusion contradicts the previous clause; if they can remember easily, the work should be less difficult.

× Actually when I was a child I used to make a list on paper but with time I grew up and nowadays I am making a list on my phone because I carry phone everywhere I go.

✓ Actually, when I was a child I used to make lists on paper but as I grew up, nowadays I make lists on my phone because I carry my phone everywhere I go.

The phrase 'carry phone' is missing the possessive pronoun 'my'. Also, 'making a list' should be 'make lists' for habitual action. Added commas for clarity.

× So carrying paper can be can be lost or anything to be happen to physical things so.

✓ So carrying paper can be lost or something can happen to physical things.

The phrase 'anything to be happen' is incorrect; the correct form is 'something can happen'. Also, the repetition 'can be can be' is an error.