列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but lacks fluency and has grammatical errors. Try to use complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'So making list ensures that I cannot forgot anything and,' say 'Therefore, making a list ensures that I do not forget anything.'

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my mobile phone using the Notes app. This helps me remember everything I need to buy because I often forget items when I go to the market. Therefore, making a list ensures that I do not forget anything important.

建议: Your answer is good but can be clearer and more concise. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like 'so' or 'which' correctly to connect ideas. For example, 'I paste it on my wall so I can tick off each task, which helps me stay organized and motivated.'

示例: Yes, I like to make a to-do list before starting any work or study tasks. I usually paste it on my wall so I can tick off each completed task, which helps me stay organized and motivated. This method also saves me a lot of time and improves my efficiency.

建议: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly. For example, 'Some people do not like making lists because they struggle with time management, so they may fail to complete all tasks, which discourages them.'

示例: In my opinion, some people do not like making lists because they struggle to manage their time effectively. As a result, they may fail to complete all the tasks on the list, which can discourage them from using this method.

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be more fluent and structured. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'I can say.' Use linking words to contrast preferences, such as 'however' or 'but.' For example, 'I prefer to use my phone for shopping lists; however, for work or study tasks at home, I sometimes prefer paper lists.'

示例: As I mentioned earlier, I prefer to use my mobile phone to make shopping lists when I go out. However, when I am at home working or studying, I sometimes prefer to make lists on paper.

× Well, yes, usually I make list for my shopping in my mobile phone.

✓ Well, yes, usually I make lists for my shopping in my mobile phone.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple instances of making lists for shopping, indicating more than one list.

× There is an application namely notes.

✓ There is an application called Notes.

The phrase 'namely notes' is incorrect here; 'called Notes' is the correct way to introduce the name of the application.

× So I really love to make notes there because whenever I go to the market I always forgot that but I have to buy.

✓ So I really love to make notes there because whenever I go to the market I always forget what I have to buy.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'forget' is appropriate. Also, 'that but I have to buy' is unclear and corrected to 'what I have to buy'.

× So making list ensures that I cannot forgot anything and.

✓ So making a list ensures that I cannot forget anything.

The phrase 'making list' needs an article 'a' before 'list' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'forgot' should be 'forget' to match the present tense context.

× Yes, I really love to make A to do list before any work or study tasks I have to complete.

✓ Yes, I really love to make a to-do list before any work or study tasks I have to complete.

The phrase 'A to do list' needs to be 'a to-do list' with correct hyphenation and article usage.

× And usually I paste it in front of my in my front wall so that I can complete each task and go and pick in front of it with due to which I stay organized and motivated and it also saves my a lot of time and it work efficiently.

✓ And usually I paste it on my front wall so that I can complete each task and tick it off, which helps me stay organized and motivated. It also saves me a lot of time and helps me work efficiently.

The preposition 'in front of my in my front wall' is incorrect; 'on my front wall' is correct. The phrase 'go and pick in front of it' is unclear and corrected to 'tick it off'. Also, 'it work efficiently' should be 'helps me work efficiently' for clarity and correctness.

× So whenever they make a list they sometimes fail to achieve all the tasks which which discourage them and.

✓ So whenever they make a list, they sometimes fail to achieve all the tasks, which discourages them.

The verb 'discourage' should be in singular form 'discourages' to agree with the singular subject 'which' referring to the entire preceding clause.

× Uh, well, as I mentioned earlier, when I have to, I go out of my home and I have to buy something.

✓ Uh, well, as I mentioned earlier, when I have to, I go out of my house and I have to buy something.

The phrase 'go out of my home' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go out of my house' or simply 'leave my house'.

× But usually when I'm at home, I have to make list for my work or my studies, then I prefer a paper based list sometimes.

✓ But usually when I'm at home, I have to make lists for my work or my studies, then I prefer a paper-based list sometimes.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to indicate multiple lists. Also, 'paper based' should be hyphenated as 'paper-based' when used as an adjective.