列表— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes, I always make a list of when I go shopping because it can remind me to buy something important and the list also can help me to avoid the impulse buying and it can help me remember.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yes, I always make a list when I have a work. You know, making a list can help me to list all the things I have to do. And with the list I can't forget anything I have to do.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Well, they may think making a list is a behavior that is time consuming, and they will. They would be very confident that they can remember all the things they have to do and they like to start.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I always like make a list on my phone. You know phone is always with me and it is very convenient to check your list everywhere. You know, there are many timeless app and you can organize your list.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更自然的表达方式。
示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember important items and prevents impulse buying.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答中有语法错误且表达重复，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复表达。
示例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for work because it helps me organize my tasks and ensures I don't forget anything.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，建议使用连词连接句子，并明确表达观点。
示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and believe they can remember their tasks without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇，并避免重复。
示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me, making it easy to check and organize my tasks anytime.
语法
× Yes, I always make a list when I have a work.
✓ Yes, I always make a list when I have work.
“work”在这里是不可数名词，不需要加冠词“a”。
× I always like make a list on my phone.
✓ I always like to make a list on my phone.
动词“like”后面应接不定式“to make”，而不是直接接动词原形。
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