列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'go shopping' nên là 'going shopping', 'like look around' nên là 'like to look around', 'gossiping' không phù hợp với ngữ cảnh). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to look around and buy things that catch my interest.

建议: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác ('ghost' không đúng, có thể bạn muốn nói 'goal'). Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ vựng chính xác để làm câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

示例: Definitely yes. I always make a list before I start working because having a clear goal helps me stay organized and focused.

建议: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp ('before they working' nên là 'before they work') và câu hơi dài, lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn và dùng từ vựng phù hợp.

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it annoying and believe it's unnecessary for their tasks.

建议: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi đánh máy ('loss' thay vì 'list') và câu hơi dài, lặp từ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng từ vựng chính xác và câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient and I always have my phone with me.

× Actually, I don't even make a list when I'm go shopping because I think that I'm a person who like look around and find what I like to buy so that I don't make the list when I'm gossiping.

✓ Actually, I don't even make a list when I'm going shopping because I think that I'm a person who likes to look around and find what I like to buy so that I don't make the list when I'm shopping.

The phrase 'I'm go shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm going shopping' because after 'I'm' (I am), the verb should be in the present participle (-ing) form to indicate the continuous tense. Also, 'like look around' should be 'likes to look around' to agree with the singular subject 'I am a person who' and to use the correct verb form after 'like'. The word 'gossiping' is a mishearing or typo for 'shopping'. Using 'shopping' is correct here as it matches the context.

× Definitely yes. I always make a list before I work because I think that when I have a ghost to try try to achieve that, I think it's maybe a wise strategy.

✓ Definitely yes. I always make a list before I work because I think that when I have a goal to try to achieve that, I think it's maybe a wise strategy.

The phrase 'have a ghost to try try' is incorrect and seems to be a mispronunciation or typo. The correct phrase is 'have a goal to try to achieve that'. This correction clarifies the meaning and uses the correct noun 'goal' instead of 'ghost'. The verb form 'try' is correctly used here as an infinitive after 'to'.

× Yeah, I can understand why some people don't like making a list before they working or doing something, because maybe they think that it's annoying and they don't have to make a list.

✓ Yeah, I can understand why some people don't like making a list before they work or do something, because maybe they think that it's annoying and they don't have to make a list.

The phrase 'before they working' is incorrect; after 'they', the base form of the verb should be used, so it should be 'before they work'. Similarly, 'doing something' is correct as it follows 'or' and is parallel to 'work'. This correction ensures proper verb form usage after the subject pronoun.

× I prefer making a loss on my phone because I think that is very convenient and I use my phone all, all of my time, Yeah, so that I think making a list on my phone is always the best way for me.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because I think that is very convenient and I use my phone all, all of my time, yeah, so I think making a list on my phone is always the best way for me.

The word 'loss' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'list' to match the meaning of the conversation. 'Loss' is a noun meaning something lost, while 'list' refers to an itemized series, which fits the context of making lists. This correction fixes the singular noun to the correct word.