列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to give a direct response with clear reasons and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, my parents often make lists to stay organised and avoid forgetting items.

建议: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to complete your sentences and explain how making a list helps you stay focused. Use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay focused. Otherwise, I might get distracted by watching YouTube or cooking, so making a list keeps me on track.

建议: Your answer is unclear and does not address the question properly. Try to give a clear opinion and explain reasons why some people might dislike making lists, using complete sentences.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or feel restricted by having to follow a plan. They might prefer to be more spontaneous in their activities.

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by avoiding repetition and adding more specific reasons. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

示例: I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it is more convenient. For instance, I can add items anytime and anywhere, and I don't have to worry about losing a piece of paper.

× My my parents this when they shop but I don't usually when I shop because I want to buy some.

✓ My parents do this when they shop, but I don't usually because I want to buy some things.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. It repeats 'my' unnecessarily and omits verbs, causing confusion. The correction adds the verb 'do' to complete the sentence and clarifies the meaning by adding 'things'. To improve, ensure each sentence has a clear subject and verb and avoid repetition.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work because if I didn't make a list I would do something else like watching YouTube and cooking so I usually tend to.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because if I didn't make a list, I would do something else like watch YouTube and cook, so I usually tend to.

After 'would do something else like', the verbs should be in the base form, not the -ing form. 'Watching' and 'cooking' are incorrect here; 'watch' and 'cook' are correct. Also, adding commas improves readability. To improve, use base verbs after expressions like 'would do something else like'.

× I am the past song. I am the one person of that because. By making artists, they could.

✓ I am the opposite. I am the only person like that because by making lists, they could...

The original sentences are unclear and fragmented, with incorrect words ('past song' instead of 'opposite', 'artists' instead of 'lists'). The correction replaces incorrect words and restructures the sentence for clarity. To improve, use correct vocabulary and ensure sentences are complete and coherent.

× Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone than on paper because I can make a list anywhere and anytime on phone.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because I can make a list anywhere and anytime on my phone.

The phrase 'prefer to make a list on my phone than on paper' is incorrect; 'rather than' is the correct comparative preposition. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession. To improve, use 'prefer A rather than B' and include possessive pronouns when needed.