列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng có một số lỗi lặp từ và câu hơi dài. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như "I'm I'm" và chia câu dài thành câu ngắn hơn để dễ hiểu hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily. Therefore, I usually write down the items on my phone to make sure I don't miss anything.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt, tuy nhiên câu đầu hơi dài và có thể gây khó hiểu. Hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh câu quá dài.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list on my phone to help organise my day. However, if I don't have my phone, I write tasks on sticky notes and stick them on the wall to remind myself.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi lặp từ và câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer freedom. They want to manage their time spontaneously without being restricted by a schedule.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi lặp từ. Bạn nên hoàn thành câu trả lời và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng, đồng thời thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: It depends on the situation. If I need to focus and avoid distractions, I prefer writing lists on paper. However, during the day, I usually use my phone to keep track of tasks.

× I always make a list when I go shopping because I'm I'm a forgetful person and without a list of items I will more likely to forget what I should buy and I often have some notes in my phone.

✓ I always make a list when I go shopping because I'm a forgetful person and without a list of items I am more likely to forget what I should buy, and I often have some notes in my phone.

The phrase 'I will more likely to forget' is incorrect because 'will' should be followed by the base form of the verb. Here, 'am more likely to forget' is the correct form to express probability in the present tense. Also, the repeated 'I'm' is a redundancy and should be corrected to a single 'I'm'.

× I can understand why many people don't like making this and one of the reasons is probably because they want freedom and they just want to freestyle whatever they have what what time they have in the day and that's probably why.

✓ I can understand why many people don't like making lists, and one of the reasons is probably because they want freedom and they just want to freestyle whatever time they have in the day, and that's probably why.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrectly used to refer to 'making lists'; it should be 'making lists' to be clear. Also, the phrase 'whatever they have what what time they have' is redundant and confusing; it should be simplified to 'whatever time they have'.

× It actually depends on the situation. For example, if I if I were about to focus on a task and I don't want to use any social media or being distracted by my phone, so I would just write them on paper.

✓ It actually depends on the situation. For example, if I were about to focus on a task and I don't want to use any social media or be distracted by my phone, I would just write them on paper.

After 'or', the verb should be in the base form 'be' rather than the gerund 'being' to maintain parallel structure. Also, the conjunction 'so' is unnecessary after the conditional clause and should be removed for correct sentence structure.