列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but a bit repetitive and slightly unnatural in phrasing. Try to avoid redundancy and use more natural expressions. For example, instead of "helps me like magic" and repeating "helps me," you can say "It really helps me stay organized and remember important items." Also, avoid mixing 'things that I have to solve' which is unclear in this context; use 'things I need to buy.'

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and remember all the important items. This way, my shopping is more efficient and less stressful.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer linking words and more natural phrasing. For example, instead of "I tend to make a list based on the importance of the work and I solve it according to the importance," say "I prioritize my tasks and complete them accordingly." Also, avoid repeating 'importance' and improve sentence flow.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work. When I have a busy day, I prioritize my tasks and complete them accordingly. This helps me finish everything efficiently and without stress.

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and ends abruptly. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'stress free' and complete your sentences fully. Also, provide more specific reasons why some people dislike lists, such as finding them time-consuming or restrictive.

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to be spontaneous. However, I believe lists help reduce stress and make tasks more manageable.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contradictory. You first say 'Your phone' but then say you prefer paper. Also, some phrases like 'stress to stress of back to life' are unclear. Try to clearly state your preference and explain why, using simple and correct expressions.

示例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's easy to carry and I don't have to worry about my phone's battery running out. Paper lists are simple and convenient for me.

× Yes, I make a list when I go for shopping every time.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping every time.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect. The correct form is 'go shopping' because 'go' is followed by the verb in the -ing form without 'for'.

× Whenever I make a list of things that I have to solve, it helps me to remember the important things and it makes my shopping experience more enjoyable and stress free.

✓ Whenever I make a list of things that I have to do, it helps me to remember the important things and it makes my shopping experience more enjoyable and stress free.

The verb 'solve' is incorrectly used here. We 'do' tasks or things, not 'solve' them unless they are problems. So 'have to do' is the correct phrase.

× Whenever I have a busy day, I tend to make a list based on the importance of the work and I solve it according to the importance.

✓ Whenever I have a busy day, I tend to make a list based on the importance of the work and I do it according to the importance.

Again, 'solve' is incorrectly used. We 'do' work or tasks, not 'solve' them unless they are problems. So 'do it' is correct here.

× In this way I can fulfill, I can perform all my work in no time without any stress.

✓ In this way, I can complete all my work in no time without any stress.

The original sentence is awkward and contains redundancy ('fulfill' and 'perform' together). 'Complete' is a better verb here, and the sentence structure is improved by removing redundancy and adding a comma.

× I think some people don't like making lists because they find it unnecessary and extra.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they find it unnecessary and excessive.

The word 'extra' is incorrectly used as a conjunction or adjective here. 'Excessive' is the correct adjective to describe something unnecessary or too much.

× However, I believe this attitude is wrong because making a list can help you with shopping without any stress and it actually makes your experience more enjoyable and stress free and.

✓ However, I believe this attitude is wrong because making a list can help you with shopping without any stress and it actually makes your experience more enjoyable and stress free.

The sentence ends with an unnecessary conjunction 'and' which makes it incomplete. Removing the last 'and' corrects the sentence.

× Your phone. I prefer to make a list on paper rather than my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone.

The sentence starts with 'Your phone.' which is unclear and incorrect in context. Also, 'rather than my phone' should be 'rather than on my phone' to correctly use the preposition with 'phone'.

× Wherever I go, I can carry a paper with convenience without stress to stress of back to life and it is actually more easier.

✓ Wherever I go, I can carry a paper conveniently without stress, and it is actually easier.

The phrase 'carry a paper with convenience' is awkward; 'carry a paper conveniently' is better. 'Without stress to stress of back to life' is unclear and incorrect; it should be removed. 'More easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone is correct.