列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and has some grammatical errors. Try to use more varied vocabulary and avoid repeating the same ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and reduces stress. For example, when I prepare a list, I can ensure I don't forget anything important, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

建议: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and has some awkward phrasing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to explain how making lists helps you manage your work and time.

示例: Yes, I create a to-do list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks. Consequently, I can manage my time efficiently and reduce stress throughout the day.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat vague and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to provide more specific reasons and examples, and use linking words to contrast opinions.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or unnecessary. However, I think lists are useful since they help people stay organized and remember important tasks.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains many errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly, avoid repetition, and use linking words to explain your preference logically.

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because it's more reliable and I can carry it anywhere. Unlike phones, paper doesn't run out of battery, so I don't have to worry about losing my list.

× Yes, I make a list when I go to shop because I believe it makes my shopping easier and enjoyable.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because I believe it makes my shopping easier and more enjoyable.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' which uses the verb + -ing form to indicate the activity of shopping. Also, 'enjoyable' should be preceded by 'more' to compare the ease and enjoyment properly.

× When I make a list of things that I have to solve, it makes me feel less stressed and I can enjoy my shopping and I can buy everything I want to.

✓ When I make a list of things that I have to buy, it makes me feel less stressed and I can enjoy my shopping and buy everything I want.

The verb 'solve' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'buy' because the list is for shopping. Also, 'I can buy everything I want to' is redundant; 'I can buy everything I want' is sufficient.

× Yes, I make a list for my work because I believe it makes my work easier.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because I believe it makes my work easier.

This sentence is correct; no preposition error found here.

× By making a list, I can fulfill my work and time and it is less stressful and I can manage my time.

✓ By making a list, I can complete my work on time, it is less stressful, and I can manage my time better.

The phrase 'fulfill my work and time' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'complete my work on time'. Also, adding commas and conjunctions improves sentence clarity.

× I think some people don't like making this because they believe it is unnecessary and extra.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they believe it is unnecessary and extra.

The pronoun 'this' is vague here; it should be replaced with the noun 'lists' to clearly indicate what is being referred to.

× However, I believe this attitude is wrong because making a list will help you to buy what whatever you have planned and it is helpful as well.

✓ However, I believe this attitude is wrong because making a list will help you buy whatever you have planned, and it is helpful as well.

The phrase 'help you to buy what whatever' is redundant and incorrect. It should be 'help you buy whatever'. Also, 'help you buy' does not require 'to' after 'help'.

× I prefer to make a list on my paper rather than phone because I believe if I write a a list on a paper it is safe with me and I can carry it everywhere because it is convenient to carry rather than phone and I don't have to stress about back to life of a phone and I can't save my time as well.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because I believe if I write a list on paper it is safe with me and I can carry it everywhere because it is more convenient to carry than a phone, and I don't have to stress about the phone's battery life, and I can save my time as well.

The prepositions 'on my paper' and 'rather than phone' are incorrect; it should be 'on paper' and 'rather than on my phone'. Also, 'stress about back to life of a phone' is unclear and corrected to 'stress about the phone's battery life'. The sentence is long and needs commas for clarity.