列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. For example, instead of saying "I use my brain instead of writing on the paper" and "I don't like to carry paper," you could combine these ideas more smoothly.

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to remember what I need. Also, I find it inconvenient to carry a paper list around the store.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has some repetition and grammatical mistakes. Try to avoid filler words like "and and and" and use clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words to organise your ideas logically.

示例: Sometimes, when I have a lot of tasks at work, I make a list in my email by writing notes about which tasks I need to do first and which ones can wait. This method helps me stay organised.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid repeating phrases and use correct verb forms. Also, explain your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points.

示例: Some people, including myself, dislike making lists because we prefer to rely on our memory. Additionally, many find it inconvenient to carry paper lists around when they are outside.

建议: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and some awkward phrasing. Use correct verb tenses and avoid unnecessary pauses or repetitions. Also, organise your ideas clearly with linking words.

示例: When I go grocery shopping, I prefer to make a list on my phone using WhatsApp because I always have my phone with me, so I can easily add items whenever I remember them.

× No, I don't make a list when I usually doing shopping.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I usually do shopping.

The verb 'doing' is incorrectly used here. After 'usually', the base form of the verb 'do' should be used instead of the '-ing' form. The correct structure is 'usually do shopping'.

× I don't like to carry paper while I doing shopping.

✓ I don't like to carry paper while I am doing shopping.

After 'while', a continuous action should be expressed with the present continuous tense 'I am doing shopping' rather than the base verb or '-ing' form alone.

× I make a record on my e-mail and and and write a some notes regarding that work, which one I need to do 1st and which one I need to do later.

✓ I make a record on my e-mail and write some notes regarding that work, which ones I need to do first and which ones I need to do later.

The phrase 'a some notes' is incorrect; 'some notes' is correct without 'a'. Also, 'which one' should be plural 'which ones' to agree with 'notes'. '1st' should be written as 'first' for formal correctness.

× Especially I don't like the I don't like to making list.

✓ Especially, I don't like making lists.

The phrase 'to making' is incorrect; after 'like', either 'to make' or 'making' can be used, but not both together. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' to generalize the statement.

× Some people prefer to using their memory instead of papers and they don't like to hang out with paper in streets.

✓ Some people prefer using their memory instead of papers and they don't like to carry paper in the streets.

After 'prefer', the gerund form 'using' is correct, not 'to using'. Also, 'hang out with paper' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'carry paper'. 'In streets' should be 'in the streets' with the definite article.

× First of all, if I went to groceries, I I don't like to carry a paper.

✓ First of all, if I go to the groceries, I don't like to carry paper.

The conditional 'if' clause referring to a habitual action should use the present tense 'go' not past 'went'. Also, 'groceries' as a place should be preceded by 'the'. 'A paper' is incorrect; 'paper' is uncountable here and does not need an article.