列表— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes, I always make a list for shopping because it's easier to purchase what you want and avoid unplanned purchasing saving costs. Also it saves my time and.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
First of all, I want to underline that my job is very hard. I work in the field of procurement, so I always make a list for my work and it helps me a lot 'cause it saves my time. I am more organized and productive.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
There is 2 reasons why some people don't making lists. First is they are unorganized and they don't make a list and second reason is that they are unpredictable, they don't like to organize, plan everything and they are waiting some.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I used to make a list on paper when I was a child, but nowadays it is more acceptable for me to make a list, uh, on my phone 'cause I always have on my phone along with me and it easy to underline everything.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 70.0建议: Your answer is generally clear but incomplete and slightly redundant. Try to finish your sentences fully and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, 'because' and 'so'.
示例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me buy only what I need and avoid unnecessary expenses. Moreover, it saves me time since I can shop more efficiently.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 80.0建议: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but avoid informal expressions like 'cause'. Also, try to use linking words such as 'therefore' or 'as a result' to connect ideas better.
示例: My job in procurement is quite demanding, so I always make a list for my tasks. This helps me save time and, as a result, I become more organized and productive.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 60.0建议: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and clarify your points. Also, use linking words like 'firstly' and 'secondly' to structure your answer.
示例: There are two reasons why some people dislike making lists. Firstly, they tend to be unorganized and prefer not to plan. Secondly, they are unpredictable and enjoy spontaneity rather than scheduling everything.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 75.0建议: Your answer is understandable but contains filler words and informal language. Try to avoid fillers like 'uh' and use formal linking words such as 'because'. Also, clarify your points more precisely.
示例: I used to make lists on paper when I was younger, but now I prefer using my phone because I always have it with me, and it is easier to edit and check off items digitally.
语法
× There is 2 reasons why some people don't making lists.
✓ There are 2 reasons why some people don't make lists.
The subject 'reasons' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, after 'don't', the base form of the verb 'make' should be used, not the gerund 'making'. This corrects subject-verb agreement and verb form usage.
× There is 2 reasons why some people don't making lists.
✓ There are 2 reasons why some people don't make lists.
After the auxiliary verb 'don't', the base form of the verb 'make' should be used, not the '-ing' form 'making'. This is because 'don't' requires the base verb form in negative sentences.
× it easy to underline everything.
✓ it is easy to underline everything.
The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to link the subject 'it' and the adjective 'easy'. This is a singular subject-verb agreement issue where the verb 'is' is necessary.
× Also it saves my time and.
✓ Also, it saves my time.
The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the thought, which is a sentence structure error. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.
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