列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'helps me don't forget' nên là 'helps me not to forget'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn và tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me not to forget anything and manage my budget effectively.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng câu cuối bị thiếu từ và có lỗi ngữ pháp (reduce nên là reduces). Bạn nên chú ý hoàn chỉnh câu và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list every morning to organize the tasks I need to complete during the day. This method helps me stay focused and ensures that I don't forget anything important. I find that following my list improves my productivity and reduces stress.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có lỗi lặp từ 'some some' và câu cuối hơi thiếu tự nhiên. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh hơn để ý tưởng rõ ràng.

示例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it complicated and time-consuming. Additionally, they often don't follow through with the tasks, so they feel lists are unhelpful. For example, some prefer to remember things mentally instead.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ví dụ minh họa tốt. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý lỗi nhỏ như 'be distraction' nên là 'be distracting' hoặc 'cause distraction'. Ngoài ra, tránh dùng từ thừa như 'Umm' để câu trả lời chuyên nghiệp hơn.

示例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it helps me feel more relaxed and focused. Writing things down by hand improves my memory, and I don't have to rely on my phone, which can sometimes be distracting. For example, when I write a shopping list, I feel more organized and motivated to complete my tasks.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me don't forget anything and and manage their budget to not go out.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me not forget anything and manage my budget to not go over.

The phrase 'helps me don't forget' is incorrect because after 'helps me' the verb should be in the base form or 'not' + base form, so 'helps me not forget' is correct. Also, 'and and' is a repetition error. 'Manage their budget' is incorrect because the subject is 'I', so it should be 'manage my budget'. The phrase 'to not go out' is unclear; it likely means 'to not go over' the budget.

× Yes, I usually make a list every morning to organize on the task I need to complete during the day.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list every morning to organize the tasks I need to complete during the day.

The preposition 'on' after 'organize' is incorrect. The verb 'organize' should be followed directly by the object without a preposition. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context.

× I find that following my list improves my productivity and reduce.

✓ I find that following my list improves my productivity and reduces it.

The verb 'reduce' does not agree with the singular subject implied by 'following my list'. It should be 'reduces'. Also, the object of 'reduces' is missing; adding 'it' clarifies what is reduced.

× Additionally, they often don't follow through with the task on the list, so they feel that making a list is unhelpful.

✓ Additionally, they often don't follow through with the tasks on the list, so they feel that making a list is unhelpful.

The pronoun 'the task' is singular but should be plural 'the tasks' to match the context of multiple items on a list.

× For example, some some prefer to remind things mentally rather.

✓ For example, some prefer to remember things mentally instead.

The phrase 'some some' is a repetition error. 'Remind things' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'remember things'. 'Rather' is incorrectly used; 'instead' is the appropriate adverb here.

× Umm, actually, I prefer to make this on paper because it makes me feel more relaxed and focused.

✓ Umm, actually, I prefer to make my list on paper because it makes me feel more relaxed and focused.

The pronoun 'this' is vague; specifying 'my list' clarifies the meaning.

× Writing things down by hand helps me remember better and I don't have to rely on my phone, which can sometimes be distraction.

✓ Writing things down by hand helps me remember better and I don't have to rely on my phone, which can sometimes be distracting.

The word 'distraction' is a noun, but the sentence requires an adjective to describe 'phone'. The correct adjective form is 'distracting'.