列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: この回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りと不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「make my list」より「make a list」の方が自然です。また、「memorize and understand to me」は不自然なので、「remember and understand」などに直しましょう。さらに、理由を明確にし、簡潔に答えることが大切です。

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what to buy and makes shopping easier.

建议: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。「calendar pan branding」の意味が不明瞭なので、具体的に説明しましょう。また、理由を明確にし、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いです。

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work. It helps me plan my tasks and manage my time effectively, so it definitely works.

建议: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、簡潔に答える練習をしましょう。また、繰り返しや曖昧な表現を避け、論理的に話すことが重要です。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because it takes time, and they may be too busy to create or update them.

建议: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多いです。「I prefer on my phone」より「I prefer to make lists on my phone」が自然です。また、理由を簡潔にまとめ、接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いでしょう。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easier to edit, and I can check my list anytime since I always have my phone with me.

× Yes, I always make my list because it is easier to memorize and understand to me and I can work it out.

✓ Yes, I always make my list because it is easier for me to memorize and understand, and I can work it out.

The phrase 'understand to me' is incorrect. The correct preposition to express the beneficiary of an action is 'for'. So, 'easier for me to memorize and understand' is the proper form.

× Yes it does. I always make my list and like calendar pan branding it does work. To my planning and my time schedule management and it helps me.

✓ Yes, it does. I always make my list and use calendar planning; it does work for my planning and time schedule management, and it helps me.

The phrase 'like calendar pan branding' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. Assuming 'calendar planning' is intended, 'To my planning and my time schedule management' should be 'for my planning and time schedule management' to correctly indicate purpose.

× Because it takes time and if someone are busy like no time to make, make some re make some list and uh, it's, it's easier to make. I don't know why they why they didn't.

✓ Because it takes time and if someone is busy and has no time to make or remake a list, it's easier not to make one. I don't know why they don't.

The subject 'someone' is singular and requires the singular verb 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'make some re make some list' is awkward; 'make or remake a list' is clearer. The sentence also needs restructuring for clarity.

× I prefer on my phone because it's easier and then I can delete it and I can copy and paste.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easier, and then I can delete, copy, and paste them.

The phrase 'I prefer on my phone' is incomplete; 'prefer to make lists on my phone' is correct. Also, listing actions should be parallel and clear.

× Then I always uh, with my phone so I can always check my list, calendar running and always I can remember anytime.

✓ I always have my phone with me, so I can always check my list and calendar, and I can remember things anytime.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Proper sentence structure requires a subject and verb; 'I always have my phone with me' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'calendar running' is unclear; 'check my calendar' is better.