列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. To improve, try to avoid repeating phrases and use a more natural structure. Also, adding a reason or example would enrich your response.

示例: I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to rely on my memory. For instance, I often remember the items I need without writing them down.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to use correct articles and clearer expressions. Also, explain briefly how effective your list is.

示例: I always make a to-do list at work to ensure I don't forget any tasks. It works well because I can keep track of everything I need to do.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating words.

示例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because it takes time to organise all their tasks, and they feel it is unnecessary.

建议: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more natural linking words and correcting minor grammar issues. Also, try to vary your vocabulary slightly.

示例: Recently, I prefer making lists on my smartphone rather than on paper because I always carry my phone with me, so I can check the list anytime.

× I don't make a list much when I go to when I go shopping, I rather rely on my memorization.

✓ I don't make a list much when I go shopping; I rather rely on my memorization.

The phrase 'when I go to when I go shopping' contains a repetition error. Removing the repeated phrase improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I always make A to do list while working in order not to forget anything I have to do.

✓ I always make a to-do list while working in order not to forget anything I have to do.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to correctly form the noun phrase.

× I don't think my memorization's killed.

✓ I don't think my memorization has failed.

The phrase 'memorization's killed' is incorrect. The verb 'killed' is inappropriate here; 'has failed' correctly conveys the intended meaning using the present perfect tense.

× In my opinion that is because it takes much time to organize all all tasks into one list and some people think it is unnecessary.

✓ In my opinion, that is because it takes a lot of time to organize all tasks into one list, and some people think it is unnecessary.

The phrase 'much time' is better replaced with 'a lot of time' in this context. Also, the repeated word 'all' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× Recently I prefer making a list on smartphone then on paper because I always bring my smartphone anywhere thus I can check it always.

✓ Recently, I prefer making a list on my smartphone rather than on paper because I always bring my smartphone with me, so I can check it anytime.

The phrase 'on smartphone' needs the possessive 'my'. 'Then' should be 'rather than' to show preference. 'Bring my smartphone anywhere' is better as 'bring my smartphone with me'. 'Thus' is replaced with 'so' for naturalness, and 'check it always' is better as 'check it anytime'.