列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct grammar and avoid repeating similar ideas. For example, instead of saying "I'm a very impulse buying," say "I tend to buy impulsively." Also, avoid repeating the idea of budget twice. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I tend to buy things impulsively. Therefore, keeping track of items helps me stay within my budget and shop more efficiently.

建议: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. For example, "write down my notepad" should be "write on my notepad." Also, avoid incomplete sentences like "rather than just spending my time in." Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas clearly.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work every morning by writing on my notepad what I need to do throughout the day. I prefer to organize my tasks because it helps me track my activities and be more productive.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and is somewhat repetitive. For example, "bounded" should be "bound," and "have wrote down" should be "have written down." Also, try to use linking words like "because" and avoid repeating the same idea. Make your explanation clearer and more concise.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel bound by the tasks they have written down, which may limit their flexibility and reduce their productivity.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. For example, "more efficient and accurate more than taking a paper" is incorrect. Try to say "more efficient and accurate than carrying paper everywhere." Use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more efficient and accurate than carrying paper everywhere I go.

× Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping because I'm a very impulse buying and keeping track of items makes me stay within my budget and also creates a much more efficient and limited budget.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping because I'm very impulsive and keeping track of items helps me stay within my budget and also creates a much more efficient and limited budget.

The phrase 'I'm a very impulse buying' is incorrect because 'impulse buying' is a noun phrase, not an adjective describing a person. The correct adjective is 'impulsive'. Also, 'helps me stay' is more appropriate than 'makes me stay' in this context.

× When I wake up in the morning, I just write down my notepad about what I need to do in my whole day.

✓ When I wake up in the morning, I just write down on my notepad what I need to do for my whole day.

The verb 'write down' requires the preposition 'on' when referring to the surface or medium. Also, 'about' is unnecessary here; 'what I need to do for my whole day' is clearer.

× And I prefer doing that in a organized way, which helps me track my daily activities and be productive most of the time rather than just spending my time in.

✓ And I prefer doing that in an organized way, which helps me track my daily activities and be productive most of the time rather than just spending my time idly.

The article before 'organized' should be 'an' because 'organized' starts with a vowel sound. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'spending my time in'; it needs a complement such as 'idly' to complete the meaning.

× I think some some of the people don't like making a list because they might feel that they're being bounded by the things they have wrote down and they need to go through how the things that they have write down.

✓ I think some people don't like making a list because they might feel that they're being bound by the things they have written down and they need to go through the things that they have written down.

The phrase 'being bounded' is incorrect; the correct past participle is 'bound'. Also, 'have wrote' is incorrect; the correct form is 'have written'. The phrase 'go through how the things' is awkward and corrected to 'go through the things'.

× I do prefer making a list on my phone because it is much more efficient and accurate more than taking a paper everywhere wherever we go and see things.

✓ I do prefer making a list on my phone because it is much more efficient and accurate than taking paper everywhere we go and seeing things.

The phrase 'more than taking a paper' is incorrect; 'than taking paper' is correct because 'paper' is uncountable here. Also, 'wherever we go and see things' is awkward; 'everywhere we go and seeing things' is clearer.