列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cavabınızda qrammatik səhvlər və söz seçimi mövcuddur. Daha təbii və aydın ifadə üçün cümlələrinizi sadə və düzgün qurmağa çalışın. Məsələn, 'I don't usually go shopping, so I don't make a list. But if I need something, I write it down on my phone and send it to my parents.' kimi ifadələr daha təsirli olar.

示例: I don't usually make a shopping list because I don't go shopping often. However, when I need something, I write it down on my phone and send it to my parents.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə qarışıqlıq və qrammatik səhvlər var. Cavabınızı daha sadə və aydın ifadə edin, məsələn, 'I don't have a job, but when I have tasks to do, I make a list according to the subjects. It helps me organize my day better.'

示例: I don't have a job currently, but when I have tasks to complete, I make a list based on the subjects. This helps me manage my day more easily.

建议: Cavabınız ümumilikdə yaxşıdır, amma təkrarlar var. Daha təbii olmaq üçün cümlələri birləşdirərək ifadə edin. Məsələn, 'Some people prefer to remember things instead of writing lists because they find it easier to keep information in their mind.'

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things mentally rather than writing them down.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə qarışıqlıq və qrammatik səhvlər var. Cavabınızı daha aydın və məntiqli etmək üçün fikirlərinizi düzgün ardıcıllıqla ifadə edin. Məsələn, 'I prefer making lists on paper because it's faster. However, when my parents go shopping, I write the list on my phone and send it to them so they can easily see it.'

示例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's quicker. But when my parents go shopping, I write the list on my phone and send it to them so they can easily access it.

× Actually no, I don't make a list when I show because I don't usually go for shopping.

✓ Actually no, I don't make a list when I shop because I don't usually go shopping.

The verb 'show' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'shop'. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. The verb 'go' is followed by the gerund form 'shopping' to indicate the activity.

× But when I need something like my that I need to tell my parents, I write down to their chat on my phone and then I sent it to them.

✓ But when I need something that I need to tell my parents, I write it down in their chat on my phone and then I send it to them.

The phrase 'like my that' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'something that'. Also, 'write down to their chat' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in'. The verb 'sent' should be in present tense 'send' to match the context.

× That's why I don't usually I don't prefer to make list.

✓ That's why I usually don't prefer to make a list.

The sentence has redundancy with 'don't usually I don't'. It should be 'usually don't'. Also, 'make list' is missing the article 'a' before 'list'.

× Actually I don't work I missed you then.

✓ Actually, I don't work; I missed you then.

The sentence is unclear and seems to have a typo or misused words. Possibly 'I missed you then' is incorrect in context. It might be intended as 'I am a student' or 'I don't work currently'. Without more context, the sentence is confusing and needs clarification.

× And when I am like when I have works of text tasks to do, I usually make least like a like accordingly with subject I need to do.

✓ And when I have tasks to do, I usually make a list according to the subject I need to do.

The word 'works' is incorrect; 'tasks' is the correct plural noun. 'Make least' should be 'make a list'. The phrase 'like a like accordingly with subject' is incorrect and should be 'according to the subject'.

× That's why it helps me a lot because it makes my like day easier.

✓ That's why it helps me a lot because it makes my day easier.

The word 'like' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context and should be removed.

× Some individuals don't like making lists because they can keep it on their mind.

✓ Some individuals don't like making lists because they can keep them in their minds.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'lists' which is plural, so 'them' is correct. Also, the phrase 'on their mind' should be 'in their minds'.

× They don't need to write down something on paper or on message on their phone.

✓ They don't need to write down something on paper or in a message on their phone.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect before 'message'; the correct preposition is 'in'. Also, 'a message' is needed to specify the noun.

× Definitely on my paper because it's easier and faster.

✓ Definitely on paper because it's easier and faster.

The phrase 'on my paper' is unnatural; the correct expression is 'on paper'.

× I can just for example, when my parents got shopping, I always write it on my phone and I'm always stop and send it to them because they can easily reach that message and see that.

✓ For example, when my parents go shopping, I always write it on my phone and I always stop and send it to them because they can easily access that message and see it.

The phrase 'got shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. 'I'm always stop' is incorrect; it should be 'I always stop'. 'Reach that message' is unnatural; 'access that message' is better. 'See that' should be 'see it' referring to the message.