列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và có liên kết logic giữa các câu.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy. This way, I avoid forgetting items and prevent unnecessary spending.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về lợi ích của việc làm danh sách trong công việc.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks clearly. As a result, I can prepare better and complete my work efficiently.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích rõ lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their creativity and flexibility. They feel that lists can limit their spontaneous thinking.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm chính xác hơn, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn về lợi ích của việc dùng điện thoại để làm danh sách.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and can send me reminders. This helps me manage my tasks effectively and avoid forgetting anything.

× because for me make a list when I go into shopping is a very important thing is help me to know exactly what I want buy in my pocket so I can easily.

✓ because for me making a list when I go shopping is a very important thing; it helps me to know exactly what I want to buy so I can easily.

The verb 'make' should be in the gerund form 'making' after 'for me' to function as a noun. Also, 'go into shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. The phrase 'is help me' should be 'it helps me' to agree with the singular subject and correct verb form. 'What I want buy' should be 'what I want to buy' to include the infinitive 'to'. The phrase 'in my pocket' is misplaced and unnecessary here.

× Yes I do because for me making a list when I work help me work better because it can help me to know exactly what I want when I finish the work and is also helped me to prepare for the work.

✓ Yes, I do because for me making a list when I work helps me work better because it can help me to know exactly what I want when I finish the work and it also helps me to prepare for the work.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list'. 'Is also helped me' is incorrect; it should be 'it also helps me' to maintain present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× Not everybody are the same, but I think that the people that they are don't lie to making.

✓ Not everybody is the same, but I think that the people who don't like making lists.

'Not everybody are' should be 'Not everybody is' because 'everybody' is singular. 'The people that they are' is redundant; 'the people who' is correct. 'Don't lie to making' is incorrect; it should be 'don't like making'.

× This may be because they are. Dependent more about the creative thinking so that when they're making the list, the list will. Cannot help them to be the base.

✓ This may be because they depend more on creative thinking so that when they're making the list, the list cannot help them to be the base.

'Dependent more about' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'depend more on'. The sentence was fragmented and needed to be combined properly for clarity.

× Each of them have their old benefit, but for me I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient an it can remind me about my tax so that I can do my tasks better an cannot forget my tasks to do.

✓ Each of them has its own benefit, but for me I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient and it can remind me about my tasks so that I can do my tasks better and not forget my tasks to do.

'Each' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. 'Their old benefit' is incorrect; it should be 'its own benefit' to agree with singular 'each'. 'An' should be 'and'. 'My tax' should be 'my tasks'. 'Cannot forget' should be 'not forget' to fit the sentence structure.